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Array ( [sid] => 119062 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Wats the matter? [time] => 2006-04-27 03:14:11 [hometext] => ***** OFF SO READ IT IF U WANT, STUPID BUT GLAD ITS OUT NOW [bodytext] => Whats the problem that you got with me?
Seems like everything I do you disappointed in me
Why you tryin to control everything I want to be me!
Asking wat jobs to take and life to live
Don't you know you can't control me?
I know who's in control but wat do u do to me?
Priorities I got but you say I cannot see
Why u tryin to say that i'm dumb, deaf and blind?
Be sure that you look in yourself first
Then help me out if decide to let you Can u see?
Wats the matter, is it me that is in despair?
Yes your right but wat do u really care?
U don't even help out the one who conceive me?
All thru the years I knew somethin wasn't right
Where did all this come from and why?
Wat's the matter with everything around me?
Don't even try to tell me jes let me be me.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 184 [topic] => 43 [informant] => packatack [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 11 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
Wats the matter?

Contributed by packatack on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 03:14:11 AM in AEST
Topic: oops



Whats the problem that you got with me?
Seems like everything I do you disappointed in me
Why you tryin to control everything I want to be me!
Asking wat jobs to take and life to live
Don't you know you can't control me?
I know who's in control but wat do u do to me?
Priorities I got but you say I cannot see
Why u tryin to say that i'm dumb, deaf and blind?
Be sure that you look in yourself first
Then help me out if decide to let you Can u see?
Wats the matter, is it me that is in despair?
Yes your right but wat do u really care?
U don't even help out the one who conceive me?
All thru the years I knew somethin wasn't right
Where did all this come from and why?
Wat's the matter with everything around me?
Don't even try to tell me jes let me be me.




Copyright © packatack ... [ 2006-04-27 03:14:11]
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Re: Wats the matter? (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 08:36:42 AM AEST
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that is their problem. Wonderful poem, ty.

RaquelLeah


Re: Wats the matter? (User Rating: 1 )
by American_Beauty_in_dixie on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 02:06:18 PM AEST
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I can hear this, set to a beat....keep it up, your a born song writer if you ask me..




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