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[sid] => 119053
[catid] => 1
[aid] => mick
[title] => little one
[time] => 2006-04-27 00:51:01
[hometext] => this is my first poem and any comments are welcomed as well as sugestions. thank you
[bodytext] => Darknes falls, a scream repressed, a shadow falls ahead, a dark so deep surpresses life and hell inside is born. a soul destroyed before it died and loving as it seamed, but pain untold, a wish for death and inocence in ruins. no farthers face or promises, of love or comfort always , will turn it back and take away the darkness left within. a void so deep, and at a time when joy should live inside, the darkness called and so she went seeking some kind of freedom. and at the edge, a vivid dream, she screams and dives beneath, and blistering cold now numbs the pain , and the little one now sleeps. [comments] => 1 [counter] => 187 [topic] => 13 [informant] => welch12 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
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