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Array ( [sid] => 119034 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => because of where i've been [time] => 2006-04-26 18:55:25 [hometext] => [bodytext] => today I have no feelings
try as I might
they seem to fade away
what should I do
My heart is turning grey
I can feel inflicted pain
that is slowly taking me to where I want to go
The only thing I feel
Is what I don't know
and I try to figure out
what it is that I'm trying to figure out
But then I feel the uncertainness and the doubt
I can't see
my eyes are directing me
to what is not me
And each step takes me closer to what is meant to be
And I'm scared
scared of what I can't see
I could stop and fall to the bottom of my sadness
down there unhappy and thoughtless
pain is an everlasting feeling
that sucks me in
And it'll always be there
because of where I've been [comments] => 1 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 32 [informant] => marly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SadPoetry )

because of where i've been

Contributed by marly on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:55:25 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

today I have no feelings
try as I might
they seem to fade away
what should I do
My heart is turning grey
I can feel inflicted pain
that is slowly taking me to where I want to go
The only thing I feel
Is what I don't know
and I try to figure out
what it is that I'm trying to figure out
But then I feel the uncertainness and the doubt
I can't see
my eyes are directing me
to what is not me
And each step takes me closer to what is meant to be
And I'm scared
scared of what I can't see
I could stop and fall to the bottom of my sadness
down there unhappy and thoughtless
pain is an everlasting feeling
that sucks me in
And it'll always be there
because of where I've been

Copyright © marly ... [ 2006-04-26 18:55:25]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: because of where i've been (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:07:07 PM AEST
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profound thoughts-
but what I liked most was the noncomform script-
(no caps.. no puncuation.. ect.)
In my opinion.. this style will always make for a more powerful composition..and is my favorite of all styles..

great write-

B

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