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Array ( [sid] => 119024 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => None [time] => 2006-04-26 16:06:32 [hometext] => wanted to see if I still could write suiced poetry even though I've passed that time in my life. [bodytext] => The rise and fall of the world around
No fear of standing here
Watching the world move round
An empty shell, a husk of a man
Drowning in the waters of the damned
I nolonger want to fight
For death is in my sight
Cold black eyes void of life
Death has come to free my strife
Tears flow from my eyes
Turn to ice as they fall into a sea of lies
Death moves closer, knife in hand
Am I ready to leave this land
I take the knife in my chest
Cut out my heart and lay it to rest
Blood flows from the hole
Free at last from this pain in my soul
My eyes close as i go numb
Finaly my life is done [comments] => 2 [counter] => 254 [topic] => 36 [informant] => spyndl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 3 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => Suicide )

None

Contributed by spyndl on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 04:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic: Suicide

The rise and fall of the world around
No fear of standing here
Watching the world move round
An empty shell, a husk of a man
Drowning in the waters of the damned
I nolonger want to fight
For death is in my sight
Cold black eyes void of life
Death has come to free my strife
Tears flow from my eyes
Turn to ice as they fall into a sea of lies
Death moves closer, knife in hand
Am I ready to leave this land
I take the knife in my chest
Cut out my heart and lay it to rest
Blood flows from the hole
Free at last from this pain in my soul
My eyes close as i go numb
Finaly my life is done

Copyright © spyndl ... [ 2006-04-26 16:06:32]
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Re: None (User Rating: 1 )
by heartless_soul on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 10:30:10 PM AEST
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I dont meen to sound rude but I dont think that any one would truly be able to forget that time of there life. This was a well writen poem and I do hope that your are truly over that stage of your life, I am looking forword to reading more from you later. Be Well.

*H_S*

Re: None (User Rating: 1 )
by spyndl on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 12:39:01 AM AEST
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O yeah im perfectly fine, i found what i needed from life and now the darkness has no place

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