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Array ( [sid] => 119020 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Don't Give Up [time] => 2006-04-26 14:53:08 [hometext] => When you think you can't make it, look up. [bodytext] => Sometimes life doesn't go our way
Living it half empty, day by day
Your thoughts are depressing
Your mind is stressing
All you speak is bad confessing
Can't you see that life's a blessing
Maybe in disguise
Or maybe you're just blind
Seeing what's only real in your mind
You think you have to see to believe
But have you ever seen the breeze
The current situation you were dealt
The cards just don't pick themselves
It may be hard, It may be tough
But you can handle it, no matter how rough
Don't give up even though the shots keep coming
Don't let that get you out of the running
Maybe you haven't noticed
But you're stronger than this
This fake life we're handed
You haven't been stranded
Maybe it's time for you to get branded
The hard times this life has demanded
It's just a test
Just like the rest
With help, you can get out of this mess
Life's just a dot in the face of forever
Live for eternity, not just whatever
I'll see you in the end
Or will I see you then?
It's all up to you now
No more pretend [comments] => 3 [counter] => 559 [topic] => 19 [informant] => kaitee [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => InspirationalPoems )
Don't Give Up

Contributed by kaitee on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 02:53:08 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems



Sometimes life doesn't go our way
Living it half empty, day by day
Your thoughts are depressing
Your mind is stressing
All you speak is bad confessing
Can't you see that life's a blessing
Maybe in disguise
Or maybe you're just blind
Seeing what's only real in your mind
You think you have to see to believe
But have you ever seen the breeze
The current situation you were dealt
The cards just don't pick themselves
It may be hard, It may be tough
But you can handle it, no matter how rough
Don't give up even though the shots keep coming
Don't let that get you out of the running
Maybe you haven't noticed
But you're stronger than this
This fake life we're handed
You haven't been stranded
Maybe it's time for you to get branded
The hard times this life has demanded
It's just a test
Just like the rest
With help, you can get out of this mess
Life's just a dot in the face of forever
Live for eternity, not just whatever
I'll see you in the end
Or will I see you then?
It's all up to you now
No more pretend




Copyright © kaitee ... [ 2006-04-26 14:53:08]
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Re: Don't Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Monday, 1st May 2006 @ 11:02:38 AM AEST
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i liked it

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Re: Don't Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST
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with no spacing it looked to long, wasnt very interested, its like i read this somewhere else, it talked about how depressing it was but really it was how depressing and torture to read this poem


Re: Don't Give Up (User Rating: 1 )
by ek_da_poet on Monday, 8th May 2006 @ 04:07:47 PM AEST
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with no spacing it looked to long, wasnt very interested, its like i read this somewhere else, it talked about how depressing it was but really it was how depressing and torture to read this poem




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