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SultryRose's Signatures

Too many times luv ain't true
Just a place to hang yo hat.
Superficially you often pretend.
Don't stop here you dirty rat.

Hey now, wrangler if ya can't
luv with yo heart
Git on down, way on down the road.
Don't even bother to start.
Git on down, way down the road.

Deep inside real luv flows out
Understanding deep inside ya see?
Ya gotta forget selfish banter
Git out of yo self to be free.

Give much more than ya take
Let it flow from heart to soul.
Neva take luv for granted, hey!
Luv like there's no other, ya know?

Be steadfast, unmovable, neva sway.
Treat her like ya wonna be treated.
Let kindness, tenderness always rule.
Remind her that she'll 4 eva be needed.

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GIT ON DOWN

Contributed by emystar on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 11:28:00 PM in AEST
Topic: SongLyrics

SultryRose's Signatures

Too many times luv ain't true
Just a place to hang yo hat.
Superficially you often pretend.
Don't stop here you dirty rat.

Hey now, wrangler if ya can't
luv with yo heart
Git on down, way on down the road.
Don't even bother to start.
Git on down, way down the road.

Deep inside real luv flows out
Understanding deep inside ya see?
Ya gotta forget selfish banter
Git out of yo self to be free.

Give much more than ya take
Let it flow from heart to soul.
Neva take luv for granted, hey!
Luv like there's no other, ya know?

Be steadfast, unmovable, neva sway.
Treat her like ya wonna be treated.
Let kindness, tenderness always rule.
Remind her that she'll 4 eva be needed.

Copyright © emystar ... [ 2006-04-25 23:28:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:09:15 AM AEST
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well well emystar to be honest I would need to hear this one played to music in order to make any further comment. :)
Be good, take care.

sadaddy

Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 06:44:33 AM AEST
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You tell 'em, Grrlfriend...put out or get out!!
Hugs and Glad all is well...
Luv
Jenni

Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by Spazzo on Wednesday, 26th April 2006 @ 01:19:09 PM AEST
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This is a great poem, and it has an awesome meaning.

Take care.

Scott

Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by Packatack on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:52:44 AM AEST
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Hey cool poem its sounds good too, I play guitar so i can see it....thanks for sharing it

Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 10:04:37 PM AEST
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Another realistic song. You're the best song writer I know.............who can we tell to publish these?
Hope someday to hear them all in music Emy.........they're good enough that's for sure!
Warm love,
momconsue

Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 09:07:29 PM AEST
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yea man don't be moochin.. lol.. home is where the heart is where ya hang your hat dude.. hey emy, that pic of that cowboy is very goodlooking lol... he does stand there looking as if he is too sexy for his body lol... oh my... lol.... am in a good mood today, forgive my comment, I could not resist typing this lol.. your poem is very great.. I love it..

RL

Re: GIT ON DOWN (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Tuesday, 27th June 2006 @ 12:52:00 AM AEST
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I thought the tittle conveyed a rhythumic feel yep i was right as i read it i could hear a nice country beat going along with this. ala " Gambler" by kenny rogers, u ought 2 record your songs great lyrics nice feel 2 it. well done emy.

((((emystar)))))

Ben

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