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Array ( [sid] => 118967 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => my sic intuition [time] => 2006-04-25 15:46:07 [hometext] => inspired by the way i fill about certin people when i meet them....... [bodytext] => Form the moment you opened your mouth I knew there was somthing about you ....
somthing I couldnt trust, somthing seriously wrong,
but i let it slide, i knew it was my sic intuition that was telling my of your eternal damnation to your mind.

Then we start to talk and I realize you ideas are extreamly contraversial...
You idea of justice I blured in to the evil in your mind......
I ask what is you hobby you say killing wiith a smile...
I say do you love , you say with a vengance......
I say do you know , you say you are omniciant....
I know, I can feel the evil of you tourmented heart with my sic intuition...
I wish I didnt have this gift so i can live......

I show you , you can trust me and you confide that you ARE CLOSE TO THE RESTING ......
and that you didnt want to leave alone....
You grab my hand and dragg me int to the bathroom to tell me somthing..


"you are the first person in my life that can understand me and not judge me....I love you...I want to be with you eternily....we are going to spend the rest of our existance together ...."and as you slowly watch the blood flow from my throat you become excited that you have finily found me.
I should have listened to my sic intuition..... [comments] => 2 [counter] => 244 [topic] => 59 [informant] => deathisfreedom [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 7 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => psychoticpoems )
my sic intuition

Contributed by deathisfreedom on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 03:46:07 PM in AEST
Topic: psychoticpoems



Form the moment you opened your mouth I knew there was somthing about you ....
somthing I couldnt trust, somthing seriously wrong,
but i let it slide, i knew it was my sic intuition that was telling my of your eternal damnation to your mind.

Then we start to talk and I realize you ideas are extreamly contraversial...
You idea of justice I blured in to the evil in your mind......
I ask what is you hobby you say killing wiith a smile...
I say do you love , you say with a vengance......
I say do you know , you say you are omniciant....
I know, I can feel the evil of you tourmented heart with my sic intuition...
I wish I didnt have this gift so i can live......

I show you , you can trust me and you confide that you ARE CLOSE TO THE RESTING ......
and that you didnt want to leave alone....
You grab my hand and dragg me int to the bathroom to tell me somthing..


"you are the first person in my life that can understand me and not judge me....I love you...I want to be with you eternily....we are going to spend the rest of our existance together ...."and as you slowly watch the blood flow from my throat you become excited that you have finily found me.
I should have listened to my sic intuition.....




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Re: my sic intuition (User Rating: 1 )
by guiltycircles on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 07:16:53 PM AEST
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creepy and awesome


Re: my sic intuition (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 08:28:11 PM AEST
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definetly creepy..but to be awesome..perhaps you should spell-check..
It would be...if you did.
(not meant to offend)

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