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Array ( [sid] => 11895 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Heaven [time] => 2003-02-03 18:40:00 [hometext] => What do you think . . . . . [bodytext] => now say if Heaven
was a mile away
would you pack up ya bags
and ride by da gates?
would you honestly be trustworthy
and create no more sins?
would you get down on ya knees
repent to God and ask to be forgiven?
say if Heaven was a mile away
and this world was still a mess
now being that Heaven is so close
God's children wouldn't have to stress
would people really love each other
so they can just "make it"? yet still the demons hide their faces
and just faking it
would you and I act da same way
even though we can feel God's eyes?
still watching over us
in no type of disguise
would our churches be the way they are
full of sneaky business, corruption, and deceiption?
Dirty doings, abusing children, using money,
phony offerings, dying, lying, misconception
now what world would we be livin in
what will it be like?
but this world is segrated and full of crap
even though God made us all alike
Now i said what I said
so what do you say?
what would really happen
if Heaven was a mile away? [comments] => 2 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 43 [informant] => sweetolbaby [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )

Heaven

Contributed by sweetolbaby on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 06:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: oops

now say if Heaven
was a mile away
would you pack up ya bags
and ride by da gates?
would you honestly be trustworthy
and create no more sins?
would you get down on ya knees
repent to God and ask to be forgiven?
say if Heaven was a mile away
and this world was still a mess
now being that Heaven is so close
God's children wouldn't have to stress
would people really love each other
so they can just "make it"? yet still the demons hide their faces
and just faking it
would you and I act da same way
even though we can feel God's eyes?
still watching over us
in no type of disguise
would our churches be the way they are
full of sneaky business, corruption, and deceiption?
Dirty doings, abusing children, using money,
phony offerings, dying, lying, misconception
now what world would we be livin in
what will it be like?
but this world is segrated and full of crap
even though God made us all alike
Now i said what I said
so what do you say?
what would really happen
if Heaven was a mile away?

Copyright © sweetolbaby ... [ 2003-02-03 18:40:00]
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Re: Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by Ilhar on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 08:52:01 PM AEST
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interesting write

Re: Heaven (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:00:23 PM AEST
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Great assumption! I wouldnt change a thing with myself,God makes us have choices,gives us grief,problems mistakes to learn by them!
Churches arent all bad,but yes some are!
My church is in my heart!
Great peice! Christina

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