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A fragile piece of glass
So beautiful wiht lonely eyes
You are mine at last.

Quiet and soft
What secrets do you keep?
Painful and dangerous
In darkness do you weep?

Flawless- but spiked wiht imperfections
So capable, ready to kill.
Mark your artistry upon my flesh
Cut into me your skill.

Complex in your simplicty
Too patient but too fast;
You run but you are near, i feel
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Dangerous Porcelain

Contributed by keilantra on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 05:27:22 PM in AEST
Topic: abstract

Porcelain and delicate
A fragile piece of glass
So beautiful wiht lonely eyes
You are mine at last.

Quiet and soft
What secrets do you keep?
Painful and dangerous
In darkness do you weep?

Flawless- but spiked wiht imperfections
So capable, ready to kill.
Mark your artistry upon my flesh
Cut into me your skill.

Complex in your simplicty
Too patient but too fast;
You run but you are near, i feel
This has not been our last.

Copyright © keilantra ... [ 2006-04-24 17:27:22]
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Re: Dangerous Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 06:20:12 PM AEST
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nice post...i enjoyed this...

wiz

Re: Dangerous Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:08:37 PM AEST
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In the abstract, flawless. In the personal, powerful.
In the complex, uninterpretable. In the end, one weeps.

I got two more of the works of this person to go 'fore I'm satisfied o' readin' another unbelieveable (is that how you spell that word?) poet/writer on YPDC.

My compliments.

wabl
KenMoore
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Re: Dangerous Porcelain (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 29th April 2006 @ 11:23:20 AM AEST
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You are definitely making a hell of an impact here. Once word gets around about you I can see you getting twenty to thirty times the reads, and anywhere from triple or quadruple the comments. You have an amazing gift. Here, you speak of porcelain (which is one of my favorite things to use in metaphors) but it is even more of a blessing to read someone else use it.

Porcelain - so frail, so alive, yet so dead, so beautiful in the palest of ways. While overall this poem is quite beyond simple excellency, the first and third stanzas are impeccable. Well done, you have found a fan in me. I will be looking for more.

BRAVO!

SCM

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