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Array ( [sid] => 11889 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => My own life [time] => 2003-02-03 18:00:00 [hometext] => this is one of my more angry poems, its not that good, but, just read it, and tell me what you think... [bodytext] => So i cut my wrists,
And yeah, it helps,
So i do some ***** up *****,
So what, who cares?
I hate my life, my dad, my past,
And they hate me back,
But i'm still here, still living fast,
I'm still fighting this *****.
See i'm just ***** up,
Havin watched for years
My ***** dad beat mum up,
And expect me to ***** go back to him,
Like nothing happened.
Trying to stay level,
Trying to stay sane,
But it's ***** hard
with death on the brain.
I'm just trying to live My Own Life,
It's not to be lived by you all out there,
I'm just trying to live My Own Life,
Smile and breathe my own air.
What difference does it make if
The only way for me to go on is
To cut my arms and legs,
hands and feet,
If it gets me through the day,
Washes my faults away.
Why do you ***** judge me?
'Cause i only remind you of reality,
Don't push me away,
LISTEN TO MY ***** WORDS
You gotta hear them. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 180 [topic] => 6 [informant] => M [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => AngryPoetry )

My own life

Contributed by M on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 06:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: AngryPoetry

So i cut my wrists,
And yeah, it helps,
So i do some ***** up *****,
So what, who cares?
I hate my life, my dad, my past,
And they hate me back,
But i'm still here, still living fast,
I'm still fighting this *****.
See i'm just ***** up,
Havin watched for years
My ***** dad beat mum up,
And expect me to ***** go back to him,
Like nothing happened.
Trying to stay level,
Trying to stay sane,
But it's ***** hard
with death on the brain.
I'm just trying to live My Own Life,
It's not to be lived by you all out there,
I'm just trying to live My Own Life,
Smile and breathe my own air.
What difference does it make if
The only way for me to go on is
To cut my arms and legs,
hands and feet,
If it gets me through the day,
Washes my faults away.
Why do you ***** judge me?
'Cause i only remind you of reality,
Don't push me away,
LISTEN TO MY ***** WORDS
You gotta hear them.

Copyright © M ... [ 2003-02-03 18:00:00]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My own life (User Rating: 1 )
by wyrd_faerie on Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 03:27:25 PM AEST
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wow, i aime this, i aime it a lot...well done...gorgy porgy indeed lol...

Re: My own life (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 10:04:33 PM AEST
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Emily I feel u have a talent that u have barely scratched the surface. This was really very good and very sad. I can relate to quite a bit of this. The * things detracted from the poem, but thats not your fault... Never give up writing.

Bobo (Joel)

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