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The glitter a haze of crystal moon tears,
The soul weeps at the sight.

Its death a sorrowful morning cry,
Rain, the tears of others above,
If naught for the presence of emotional ties,
No fears would burn asunder,
A presence of joy,
Beauty long since past,
They watch with weighted hearts.

A fallen angel,
Its life once bold,
Now lays in the secluded realm,
Pools of pain and tear and blood,
Make up its death bed tomb,
For though it dies and leaves the heavens,
Its presence lingers in the world of shadows,
Bestowing upon those who choose to seek it,
The power of its heart forever more.

Place not your love aside for it,
But hold it in your soul,
A simple rose of grace and beauty,
Resides now upon our heavy hearts,
Morn the loss of but one hope,
The death of an angel.
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Death of an Angel

Contributed by AyumiDevereaux on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 11:24:26 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

A single star falling earthbound,
The glitter a haze of crystal moon tears,
The soul weeps at the sight.

Its death a sorrowful morning cry,
Rain, the tears of others above,
If naught for the presence of emotional ties,
No fears would burn asunder,
A presence of joy,
Beauty long since past,
They watch with weighted hearts.

A fallen angel,
Its life once bold,
Now lays in the secluded realm,
Pools of pain and tear and blood,
Make up its death bed tomb,
For though it dies and leaves the heavens,
Its presence lingers in the world of shadows,
Bestowing upon those who choose to seek it,
The power of its heart forever more.

Place not your love aside for it,
But hold it in your soul,
A simple rose of grace and beauty,
Resides now upon our heavy hearts,
Morn the loss of but one hope,
The death of an angel.

Copyright © AyumiDevereaux ... [ 2006-04-23 23:24:26]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Death of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 23rd April 2006 @ 11:32:23 PM AEST
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This piece has some exceptional imagery, I love it, beautiful in an almost tragic way. Your wording was perfect, and I think the first and last stanza stood out most to me. Brilliant, thanks for sharing :)

Take Care
- Becca

Re: Death of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by PGreene on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 12:47:16 AM AEST
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wow this was great! truly magnificent! although the poem wassad, the imagery was amazing! i felt the sorrow u were trying to express

Re: Death of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by sararose1950 on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 09:34:57 PM AEST
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Absolutely beautiful!! Truly an amazing write-
Peace and Light

Re: Death of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Tuesday, 25th April 2006 @ 09:26:20 PM AEST
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wicked..and most profound.. your words.
Your idealism is jarring.. thought provoking-

..a few mis-wordings and misspellings..
otherwise - eternal.

B

Re: Death of an Angel (User Rating: 1 )
by sensible_paper on Friday, 9th November 2007 @ 11:48:21 AM AEST
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Imagery, Imagery, Imagery that is all I have to say its almost like reading pictures and this is what came of it. This is just beautiful

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