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Array ( [sid] => 118835 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => See Me Now [time] => 2006-04-22 23:59:16 [hometext] => Being transparent and never being able to say somehting for your self is the main subject, but the poem has deeper roots (I think) [bodytext] => See me now
As a human
With feelings; with feeling

Time does not heal
The scars that you leave
But it does fade my anger.

Your burns are deadly.
So are your words,
But stiil, i allow you to speak.

You crash down on me
and break me so easily
(See the scattered pieces i coulnd't manage to pick up?)

Good enough
Is never good enough
Just like this house is never a home.

Left in the shadows
Of your destruction
I am transparent, yet i feel more than you do.

See me now,
As a human
I will only be real to you once this house becomes a home.
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See Me Now

Contributed by keilantra on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:59:16 PM in AEST
Topic: SadPoetry

See me now
As a human
With feelings; with feeling

Time does not heal
The scars that you leave
But it does fade my anger.

Your burns are deadly.
So are your words,
But stiil, i allow you to speak.

You crash down on me
and break me so easily
(See the scattered pieces i coulnd't manage to pick up?)

Good enough
Is never good enough
Just like this house is never a home.

Left in the shadows
Of your destruction
I am transparent, yet i feel more than you do.

See me now,
As a human
I will only be real to you once this house becomes a home.

Copyright © keilantra ... [ 2006-04-22 23:59:16]
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Re: See Me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Aeicha on Thursday, 27th April 2006 @ 09:36:25 PM AEST
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very emotional and sad. your words are intense and beautiful

Re: See Me Now (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th April 2006 @ 03:22:30 PM AEST
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Aw. This sucker is energy draining sad. Dang sad.

Poetry is therapy. Retrospect. Evaluation 'n' analysis.
Beginning of.

Find in your surroundings a beautiful natural place to be, then go there often with pen 'n' notebook in hand, trade the pain of your present posts for awareness of nature and write about some beauty in an ant strugglin' to climb over yer foot. A new reality that you and your master's way with words could do proud
'n' be happy.

wabl
KenMoore
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