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[aid] => Mick
[title] => A Hero’s Superego
[time] => 2003-02-03 08:30:00
[hometext] => The only clue I can give is: birth.
I would really appreciate some thoughts and suggestions on this one, thanks.
[bodytext] => Poring within, extrinsically inside, unenumerably stratified, finely dividing with unquestioned pride. A reference above happenstance, every frame a divine haven, abstracted unprepositionally, the poet’s casually captured gaze, beguiles a self-sustained rhythm, when has there been so fuller or deeper a phase, of limpid truth, bearing the purest, of child’s guileless grace.
Witnessed the haunting, of temporal hygieniation, flecking ripples arise from under occupied eyes, his unclassified sanity, bore behind the terrestrial floor. Carried nowhere, yet risen forward, in an undeliberated orchestration, in brocaded blossom. Acceptance, an unchosen milieu, of history and belonging, read behind her eyes’ recursion, penetrating his peerlessly swollen heart, imparting, moist lightness; the undefined sweetness of honeysuckle tones sipping at his virgin nose; Simple titters, subenergetic shivers, of paroxysmal jubilance,…softly bearing presence without question…is this a pleasure?…grate with wholesome redolence, swallowed by unswallowed sonance, superimposed the venery moment as it receded his memory along, tasted yet untraced, opening the scene with fathom’s evaporation.
Below this ecliptic, the animation, equalizes in an ocean: electric, below a sky, unselected.
Inanimate leaps, feuled upon every temporal crest and spatial garner, pressing her heart further, admitting no bonds, asphyxiating all haste, distend in mind’s supple receptacle, repose recognition, until fate’s capture awaits, only one unsuspecting gaze further, recursion unenumerable, fertile love's plant, nonpareil in peer; Indistinguishable in property, Isomorph’s antisymmetrized tears.
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A Hero’s Superego
Contributed by
iso
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Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 08:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Poring within, extrinsically inside, unenumerably stratified, finely dividing with unquestioned pride. A reference above happenstance, every frame a divine haven, abstracted unprepositionally, the poet’s casually captured gaze, beguiles a self-sustained rhythm, when has there been so fuller or deeper a phase, of limpid truth, bearing the purest, of child’s guileless grace.
Witnessed the haunting, of temporal hygieniation, flecking ripples arise from under occupied eyes, his unclassified sanity, bore behind the terrestrial floor. Carried nowhere, yet risen forward, in an undeliberated orchestration, in brocaded blossom. Acceptance, an unchosen milieu, of history and belonging, read behind her eyes’ recursion, penetrating his peerlessly swollen heart, imparting, moist lightness; the undefined sweetness of honeysuckle tones sipping at his virgin nose; Simple titters, subenergetic shivers, of paroxysmal jubilance,…softly bearing presence without question…is this a pleasure?…grate with wholesome redolence, swallowed by unswallowed sonance, superimposed the venery moment as it receded his memory along, tasted yet untraced, opening the scene with fathom’s evaporation.
Below this ecliptic, the animation, equalizes in an ocean: electric, below a sky, unselected.
Inanimate leaps, feuled upon every temporal crest and spatial garner, pressing her heart further, admitting no bonds, asphyxiating all haste, distend in mind’s supple receptacle, repose recognition, until fate’s capture awaits, only one unsuspecting gaze further, recursion unenumerable, fertile love's plant, nonpareil in peer; Indistinguishable in property, Isomorph’s antisymmetrized tears.
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Re: A Hero’s Superego
(User Rating: 1 ) by wyrd_faerie on
Tuesday, 4th February 2003 @ 03:19:14 PM AEST (User
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hmmm...what can i say?well...this is a very interesting poem...but i don't understand a word of it lol...i like it muchly though...keep writing... |
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