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tears are swelling
eyes bleed a crimson cry

fears are beating
my lungs cease breathing
without you I constantly die

the stabs are re-stung
the pain is re-sung
my heart has become a martyr

ripped open, ripped out
my soul silently shouts
and your words always become harsher

they pierce and they sting
hate and cuts they do bring
i'm once again sewing together my veins

you're killing me inside
i feel like i've died
this drowning soul can't take anymore rain

and now i'm just hungover...

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Sew Myself Together Again

Contributed by Alina on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 06:35:05 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

emotions are rising
tears are swelling
eyes bleed a crimson cry

fears are beating
my lungs cease breathing
without you I constantly die

the stabs are re-stung
the pain is re-sung
my heart has become a martyr

ripped open, ripped out
my soul silently shouts
and your words always become harsher

they pierce and they sting
hate and cuts they do bring
i'm once again sewing together my veins

you're killing me inside
i feel like i've died
this drowning soul can't take anymore rain

and now i'm just hungover...

Copyright © Alina ... [ 2006-04-21 18:35:05]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Sew Myself Together Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 06:56:21 PM AEST
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~*Alina*~
A thought provoking, sad and heartfelt write penned very well. You make the reader feel ur pain and emotion. Time heals all wounds. I hope and pray ur heart heals real soon.
May ur days ahead be much brighter.
*heartfelt hugs*
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Sew Myself Together Again (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:27:14 PM AEST
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Good poem, I know how you feel.

Re: Sew Myself Together Again (User Rating: 1 )
by crimson_regret420 on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:31:27 PM AEST
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Great write. I can really relate.

-Crimson

Re: Sew Myself Together Again (User Rating: 1 )
by purplestary on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 08:46:59 PM AEST
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this is an amazing write!!! so much pain and emotion expressed so well through words..brilliant. "the stabs are re-stung
the pain is re-sung
my heart has become a martyr"
my favorate lines..and truthfully...you don't see the word martyr...i actually had to look up the definition..and the way you used it is so powerful...and it is used in context...most of the time when i run accross a word that is not so commonly used it tends to be out of context and used completely wrong...but it worked wonderfully here...thank you! ;)

Re: Sew Myself Together Again (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 07:11:08 PM AEST
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Amazing! I love your use of the darkest imagery to
convey emotion, i'm jealous. it's really wonderfully
written.

they pierce and they sting
hate and cuts they do bring
i'm once again sewing together my veins

lovely, heartbreaking, and altogether savage.
keep up the excellent writing, i'm a fan.

Dwayne

Re: Sew Myself Together Again (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 16th February 2009 @ 10:24:33 AM AEST
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just wow good written
lit it very much
cheers

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