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Array ( [sid] => 118701 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Within this heart [time] => 2006-04-20 18:52:30 [hometext] => A splew of emotion and heartache : ) [bodytext] => Within this heart
That’s made of stone
Within these lips
Was me alone

I hold my head
And present it high
But you could see through me
Amongst my transparent sigh

My eyes illuminated red
And my sorrows clearly shown
I felt so black and dead
In a place where no love was grown

I trembled with pain
And resided in fear
My only comfort was this broken heart
And my friend was this fallen tear

Life came and went
But it stayed not for me
My eyes stayed blinded
It was only you I could see

You hurt me so
With a pain I shall never forget
Yet somehow it’s leaving
But the memory stays yet

My friends have shown me comfort
And they pressed me in love
But the only print that was made
Was from death’s leather glove

I squirm within heartache
And wiggle through pain
And within these blackened tears
Was nothing to gain

My words last forever
For you they remain dead
I think of you constantly
With a head full of lead

But after all this pain
And all these wordy rhymes
Is a feeling that won’t alter
And remains for better times

I found something new
But I shall speak of it not
For good things remain secret
So that they are never forgot

My heart is now patched
And these tears now run thin
Because it is joy I have found
And I will let this new love in [comments] => 2 [counter] => 218 [topic] => 24 [informant] => whatsername [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LoveRemembered )
Within this heart

Contributed by whatsername on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 06:52:30 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered



Within this heart
That’s made of stone
Within these lips
Was me alone

I hold my head
And present it high
But you could see through me
Amongst my transparent sigh

My eyes illuminated red
And my sorrows clearly shown
I felt so black and dead
In a place where no love was grown

I trembled with pain
And resided in fear
My only comfort was this broken heart
And my friend was this fallen tear

Life came and went
But it stayed not for me
My eyes stayed blinded
It was only you I could see

You hurt me so
With a pain I shall never forget
Yet somehow it’s leaving
But the memory stays yet

My friends have shown me comfort
And they pressed me in love
But the only print that was made
Was from death’s leather glove

I squirm within heartache
And wiggle through pain
And within these blackened tears
Was nothing to gain

My words last forever
For you they remain dead
I think of you constantly
With a head full of lead

But after all this pain
And all these wordy rhymes
Is a feeling that won’t alter
And remains for better times

I found something new
But I shall speak of it not
For good things remain secret
So that they are never forgot

My heart is now patched
And these tears now run thin
Because it is joy I have found
And I will let this new love in




Copyright © whatsername ... [ 2006-04-20 18:52:30]
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Re: Within this heart (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 06:58:17 PM AEST
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oh i loved it....it practically told a whole story, the good beginning, middle, and sad end....it's awesome that you've gotten over it, kudos to you. fantastic job.

~natalya


Re: Within this heart (User Rating: 1 )
by ham323 on Saturday, 22nd April 2006 @ 11:39:22 AM AEST
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I really like this one.. I don't know why. It's just, wonderful.




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