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sadness
Contributed by
halli
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:21:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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sadness creeps in
what do u do
there is no outlet
the tears run down
your heart torn in two
no where to go
your hope in no more
your love lost too
who do you trust
to again make u whole?
Copyright ©
halli
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2006-04-20 13:21:04]
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Re: sadness
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by Craze on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:43:47 PM AEST
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| I'm incridibly disappointed that you did not add more.It was beautiful and I begg you to either write more or send me some more or{if you decide to add more}send me the rest at maxisreallycrazy@yahoo.com |
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Re: sadness
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by brew on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:24:28 PM AEST
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Oh.Halli, why is the heart sad? How can it be..maybe it isnt now, persay, yet............Such a inner touching of ones heart.! I hope this has and will continue to subside. ! Again...........another nice write.
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Brew~ |
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