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You're to blame
Contributed by
ItsFELDER
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Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 11:21:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
anguished
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My friend,
You lost the game
All blame on yourself
You chose a life of loneliness
Over her loving wealth
You will never be with her
Just let her go
Cause try as you may
Her answer is always no
A woman crushed twice
Thats too much to bear
She's done with you forever kid
Its over, she swears
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2006-04-20 11:21:24]
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Re: You're to blame
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by violet on
Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:35:28 PM AEST
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| i liked it very much....the rhyming pattern was good and i liked the choice of words. |
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