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Array ( [sid] => 118664 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Father-Time/ Ancient-of-Days [time] => 2006-04-20 03:16:47 [hometext] => Some people do travel (other than the physical means), I oft’ find myself before God’s throne within my dreams… [bodytext] => Oft’ my spirit went ‘in dreams’ to Father-time/ Ancient-of-days
No human words can ev’r describe the wonders of His ways
My friend, and I, we asked to see- Eternal-clock of time.
From that, for which He showed us, was the turning of mind.

Being drawn into His eyes, I was captivated by such thoughts.
So I requested the pleasure of His majestic thoughts, wrought…
“Always…inside,” instead of my carnal head.
The cost: “killing of my mind“ over time, He said.

This wasn’t my first trip to this bearded-white comforting King.
Noticing the fire-lake before His throne as the angels did sing.
So many times Father-time enfolded me within his loving arms.
Barely I recall his foretelling, of Victory’s Day from alarm.

There’s many dimensions of this stately white-bearded Father.
My own dad never took the time to comfort, didn’t really bother.
His clothing is white as snow, there are wheels there all ablaze.
The times Father would comfort me I'd rest calm, as in a daze.

One like the son of man came, approaching the Ancient-of-Days.
Dan. 7:13 relates, this son of man was given power over frays.
Messiah’s dominion is everlasting, that will never be destroyed.
oft' I'd visit my Fatherly wonder as the angels safely convoyed. [comments] => 6 [counter] => 209 [topic] => 62 [informant] => Lilly-Quill [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 14 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => spiritual )

Father-Time Ancient-of-Days

Contributed by Lilly-Quill on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 03:16:47 AM in AEST
Topic: spiritual

Oft’ my spirit went ‘in dreams’ to Father-time/ Ancient-of-days
No human words can ev’r describe the wonders of His ways
My friend, and I, we asked to see- Eternal-clock of time.
From that, for which He showed us, was the turning of mind.

Being drawn into His eyes, I was captivated by such thoughts.
So I requested the pleasure of His majestic thoughts, wrought…
“Always…inside,” instead of my carnal head.
The cost: “killing of my mind“ over time, He said.

This wasn’t my first trip to this bearded-white comforting King.
Noticing the fire-lake before His throne as the angels did sing.
So many times Father-time enfolded me within his loving arms.
Barely I recall his foretelling, of Victory’s Day from alarm.

There’s many dimensions of this stately white-bearded Father.
My own dad never took the time to comfort, didn’t really bother.
His clothing is white as snow, there are wheels there all ablaze.
The times Father would comfort me I'd rest calm, as in a daze.

One like the son of man came, approaching the Ancient-of-Days.
Dan. 7:13 relates, this son of man was given power over frays.
Messiah’s dominion is everlasting, that will never be destroyed.
oft' I'd visit my Fatherly wonder as the angels safely convoyed.

Copyright Â© Lilly-Quill ... [ 2006-04-20 03:16:47]
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Re: Father-Time Ancient-of-Days (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:33:44 AM AEST
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Woo… most of our poets in YPDC are turning on their focus to guided tour. But your tour is some what unique. You took us all to the paradise., and my ..my… look even our Father has long white beard . Friend you have got one rich imagination I must say.
On the whole it is a good poem.
FRANCO

Re: Father-Time Ancient-of-Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:56:33 AM AEST
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This is good. I like the use of scripture in your poem.

Re: Father-Time Ancient-of-Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 02:41:39 PM AEST
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I am so glad that you have joined us here, at YPDC. You have such a visual talent. You are imaginative, explorative, deeply spiritual, and elegant in your wording. I feel as though a queen of sorts has joined our kingdom. Though I feel she is only wanting to be a part of the common village, she shines with the royalty. Your talent never ceases to amaze me Milly. SHINE ON MY DEAR!

SHINE ON!

SCM

Re: Father-Time Ancient-of-Days (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:16:18 PM AEST
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Spiritually uplifting and thoughtprovoking.
Incredible depth of imagery.
What a blessing it is for us to have such a close relationship with our heavenly Father.
He is always only a thought and a prayer away. Excellent~

katt

Re: Father-Time Ancient-of-Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Friday, 21st April 2006 @ 06:00:33 PM AEST
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~*Milly*~
An outstanding, thought provoking and remarkably penned write delivered by a very extraodinary and talented Miss. You go girl. Your poetry is always a pleasure to read.
You have a very rich imagination. You never cease to amaze me my dear friend. I second ~*Daniel's*~ comment. Shine On ~*Milly*~
*warm huggers & big smiles from ur fan/friend*
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Father-Time Ancient-of-Days (User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on Saturday, 15th July 2006 @ 04:59:54 PM AEST
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Excellent poem. As when Isaiah saw the Lord, sitting on a throne, High and lifted up, and his train filled the Temple, etc.

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