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Array ( [sid] => 118655 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Silver Shadow [time] => 2006-04-19 23:35:36 [hometext] => [bodytext] => I first saw her by the shore, her prism eyes
Gleaming ‘cross the rainbowed skies,
Her blinding smile teasing the sun;
And her shadow, shining like a lustrous
Gem of silvery perfection.

Her pervading heartbeat directing mine,
Sure that soon they would align.
Her, a candle to salvage my withered flame;
To mend a hole that never
Wanted to carry love anew.

And the breeze brought by her gentle stride
Is the air of love on which I’ve relied,
Her passion emanating through the wind;
Her purity reflected by her mirrored
Silhouette cast upon the ground.

Strangers for a day, though I felt her hold,
And hoped that this would soon be told...
A pair of hearts melding in her hands;
With visions of two souls becoming one,
Until erupting in a flame of manic passion...

And here we are… [comments] => 6 [counter] => 289 [topic] => 2 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 35 [ratings] => 7 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

Silver Shadow

Contributed by wizard on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:35:36 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I first saw her by the shore, her prism eyes
Gleaming ‘cross the rainbowed skies,
Her blinding smile teasing the sun;
And her shadow, shining like a lustrous
Gem of silvery perfection.

Her pervading heartbeat directing mine,
Sure that soon they would align.
Her, a candle to salvage my withered flame;
To mend a hole that never
Wanted to carry love anew.

And the breeze brought by her gentle stride
Is the air of love on which I’ve relied,
Her passion emanating through the wind;
Her purity reflected by her mirrored
Silhouette cast upon the ground.

Strangers for a day, though I felt her hold,
And hoped that this would soon be told...
A pair of hearts melding in her hands;
With visions of two souls becoming one,
Until erupting in a flame of manic passion...

And here we are…

Copyright Â© wizard ... [ 2006-04-19 23:35:36]
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Re: Silver Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 12:31:34 AM AEST
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Bro..
Ive never seen such a unique composition..
I love that: A..A..AS..YOU..MAY.. style..
complete and sponteinious.. I'm sure-
I've never seen this before you.. (your composite)..
5 lines, all the way through..
I don't cast votes, but will click on 5 for this!

Billy

Re: Silver Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Vampirequeen on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:35:20 AM AEST
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wow i love this

Re: Silver Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 01:53:35 AM AEST
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~*Paul*~
A wonderful, uplifting and beautifully penned piece of poetry you have presented us with.
I needed to read this. Thank you so much for lifting my spirits.
Simply beautiful. Well done.
*warm huggers*
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Silver Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 06:19:37 AM AEST
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Oh my Paul~

first I have to say I adore the title !! (Big surprise eh? lol)

But what follows is positively the most delicate and romantic piece
I've ever read. Gentle and soft and exploding with passion. I know
what it is to feel this kind of magic.

This was [is] gorgeous! A flawless thing of beauty and as always,
with you, exquisitely unique. It's perfect.

I am completely moved.
~Breezy
(love the new avy btw. It's GREAT)

Re: Silver Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:05:34 PM AEST
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An absolutely beautiful write.....
I am left in awe....
Jenni

Re: Silver Shadow (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 09:31:55 PM AEST
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Simple, and flawless.........inner and feelins that have been unleashed...........WOW...........Wonderful piece of what is flowing for thy self.! You amaze :us: all....I m with Billy, I give you *****

Brew~

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