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Array ( [sid] => 118636 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => You said [time] => 2006-04-19 19:49:00 [hometext] => I wrote this poem within like 5 minutes..thats they why I write, with my heart...which most of the time doesn't take that long to spill out, and that was how I wrote this poem. [bodytext] => We walked alone
Beside the ocean we walk
You say you Love me
I hold you tightly

A year goes by
You broke my heart to many times
This time…is the hardest of all
You told her you loved her

I gave you my life
I gave you my soul
Most of all I gave you my heart

Another year goes by
You still tell her you love her
I stand here, crying away

I can not believe I gave you my heart
My life
My soul
I stand here crying away

Another year goes by
You come up to me
You kiss me
And I stand here crying away

I waited for you for 2 year to come back
You say “I Love”
I kiss you till I die [comments] => 1 [counter] => 157 [topic] => 2 [informant] => poetsibe [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

You said

Contributed by poetsibe on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:49:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

We walked alone
Beside the ocean we walk
You say you Love me
I hold you tightly

A year goes by
You broke my heart to many times
This time…is the hardest of all
You told her you loved her

I gave you my life
I gave you my soul
Most of all I gave you my heart

Another year goes by
You still tell her you love her
I stand here, crying away

I can not believe I gave you my heart
My life
My soul
I stand here crying away

Another year goes by
You come up to me
You kiss me
And I stand here crying away

I waited for you for 2 year to come back
You say “I Love”
I kiss you till I die

Copyright Â© poetsibe ... [ 2006-04-19 19:49:00]
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Re: You said (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilbabe on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:10:59 PM AEST
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a write i can totally relate to...i love somebody,the main source of my pain, but it doesnt look like he's coming to me. after 5 years of waiting, ive basically lost all hope. encouraging right? anyways, i like it keep up the good work.
~lexy~

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