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Array ( [sid] => 11859 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Away From Today [time] => 2003-02-02 20:00:00 [hometext] => Like most of my work, this is actually a song. I wrote this on a very bad day when I was really down. [bodytext] => I feel like ***** today -
Wish I had a hole to call my own
I still hate today -
Even though my reasons have fallen below
Stop looking that way -
Cause I can't comply to what you have shown
I still have sins to pay -
Though my soul has stopped my body still goes

Away from all I have done - I have nothing left for you
I lay in my basement with a gun - Deciding who's best for you

I feel like ***** today -
I know I am why I am here now
I still hate today -
Because of my actions I am not allowed
Stop looking that way -
Cause I can't control what I feel anymore
I still have sins to pay -
And you are not helping to lower the score

Away from all I have done - I have nothing left for you
I lay in my basement with a gun - Deciding what's right for you

I'll blame no one else - I've lost all respect for myself
And even though nothing has concieved - I've lost all reasons to believe

I feel like ***** today - I really hate today
I feel like ***** today - ***** TODAY

Away from all I have done - I have nothing left for you
I lay in my basement with a gun - Deciding who's best for you (x2) [comments] => 1 [counter] => 220 [topic] => 22 [informant] => x_Severian_x [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Away From Today

Contributed by x_Severian_x on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 08:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



I feel like ***** today -
Wish I had a hole to call my own
I still hate today -
Even though my reasons have fallen below
Stop looking that way -
Cause I can't comply to what you have shown
I still have sins to pay -
Though my soul has stopped my body still goes

Away from all I have done - I have nothing left for you
I lay in my basement with a gun - Deciding who's best for you

I feel like ***** today -
I know I am why I am here now
I still hate today -
Because of my actions I am not allowed
Stop looking that way -
Cause I can't control what I feel anymore
I still have sins to pay -
And you are not helping to lower the score

Away from all I have done - I have nothing left for you
I lay in my basement with a gun - Deciding what's right for you

I'll blame no one else - I've lost all respect for myself
And even though nothing has concieved - I've lost all reasons to believe

I feel like ***** today - I really hate today
I feel like ***** today - ***** TODAY

Away from all I have done - I have nothing left for you
I lay in my basement with a gun - Deciding who's best for you (x2)




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Re: Away From Today (User Rating: 1 )
by vincy on Saturday, 26th July 2003 @ 01:58:53 AM AEST
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You feel like kaka,
but your name indicates
you're full of love,
maybe you've lost your Armenia
became a Turk through and through.




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