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Array ( [sid] => 118583 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Another Project [time] => 2006-04-19 00:58:16 [hometext] => A follow up to a previous poem of mine titled 'I've a Home'...a thank you to my brother Bill...aka Man_On_High...for help with yet another renovation on my home... [bodytext] => Another project underway
Another hour turned into day
With hammer, nails and all in hand
Again with the strength of a brothers band

This path we’ve walked not long ago
With thoughts that this would soon follow
With aching backs and a pounding knee
Not as limber as we used to be!

New wires, pipes, walls and floors
Soon some paint and a couple of doors
Cabinets, counters, even the kitchen sink
Each day we watch this workload shrink

You’ve been by my side through it all
Be it spreading plaster on a wall,
Or some two by fours cut to size…
So quick...it’s hard to believe my eyes

And once again I convey my gratitude
(and apologize for any poor attitude!)
I hope that you will always know…
Couldn’t of done it without ya bro

Thanks Bro!! [comments] => 9 [counter] => 284 [topic] => 37 [informant] => wizard [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 22 [ratings] => 5 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => ThankYouPoems )

Another Project

Contributed by wizard on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 12:58:16 AM in AEST
Topic: ThankYouPoems

Another project underway
Another hour turned into day
With hammer, nails and all in hand
Again with the strength of a brothers band

This path we’ve walked not long ago
With thoughts that this would soon follow
With aching backs and a pounding knee
Not as limber as we used to be!

New wires, pipes, walls and floors
Soon some paint and a couple of doors
Cabinets, counters, even the kitchen sink
Each day we watch this workload shrink

You’ve been by my side through it all
Be it spreading plaster on a wall,
Or some two by fours cut to size…
So quick...it’s hard to believe my eyes

And once again I convey my gratitude
(and apologize for any poor attitude!)
I hope that you will always know…
Couldn’t of done it without ya bro

Thanks Bro!!

Copyright Â© wizard ... [ 2006-04-19 00:58:16]
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Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:09:37 AM AEST
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that's so sweet..nicely written too.

~natalya

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by Man_On_High on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:12:57 AM AEST
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bro..
first, let me say that my help will ALWAYS be forth-coming.. you know this.
It's always been a pleasure.. if even just hangin' out and breakin' bread-

Thanks a lot.. I am truly honored by this..
..buy a thousand houses.. I'll be there for every one.

Forever..

B

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by sadaddy on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:47:39 AM AEST
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Now, that is what friendship is all about. Great job Wizard. I know that Bill AKA Man_on_high is proud to be your friend too.

sadaddy

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 05:08:09 AM AEST
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beautiful poem,written with love, well done

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by brew on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:38:37 AM AEST
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WOnderful write, for having someone to always be there, no matter what. The relationship talked about in this write, is incrediable. Some will never have or will ever see, that being able to relate to a sibling is joy.Yall share what most others long for...Forever.!!!!

Hugs to both of you.
Brew~

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by katt on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 09:30:01 AM AEST
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Very good rhyme and rhythm. Enjoyed it.

Katt

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:00:47 PM AEST
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P~

What a moving post. Just like the first thank you poem, this one is full of
warmth and gratitude, but it is positively spilling over with the emotion from
the bond you two share. It's such a joy to witness. There is a saying . . . family
by coincidence, friends by choice. You guys are living proof of this statement.

We should all be as lucky.

Perfectly penned and touching to the end. Completely enjoyable!

~Breezy
eh?

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 07:50:53 PM AEST
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~*Paul*~
A beautiful, touching write written for a very remarkable and special guy, ~*Billy*~.
Brothers who share a special bond like this are very rare.
May urs last a lifetime and beyond.
I thoroughly enjoyed this write. Thanks so much for sharing it. Well done ~*Paul*~
*warm huggers*
~*suzie Q*~

Re: Another Project (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 14th June 2006 @ 11:57:19 PM AEST
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very nicely written. i think thats one of the best thank yous someone could receive

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