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My soul is free
as light as a feather
unencumbered by the shell
that was my body
as it soars above
the exquisite waterfall
how blessed I am
to behold this wondrous sight
crystal droplets of water
flow into a river of life
bringing forth a promise
to my consciousness
I will live again
a blanket of lush green below
whispering the oneness
of perfect love and blissful peace
all souls are blended
my heart is bursting with joy
as I linger and hesitate to depart
this moment in time and space
but the choice is made
and the vision disappears
as I am miraculously reborn.

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The Waterfall

Contributed by katt on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 12:43:48 PM in AEST
Topic: InspirationalPoems

My soul is free
as light as a feather
unencumbered by the shell
that was my body
as it soars above
the exquisite waterfall
how blessed I am
to behold this wondrous sight
crystal droplets of water
flow into a river of life
bringing forth a promise
to my consciousness
I will live again
a blanket of lush green below
whispering the oneness
of perfect love and blissful peace
all souls are blended
my heart is bursting with joy
as I linger and hesitate to depart
this moment in time and space
but the choice is made
and the vision disappears
as I am miraculously reborn.

Copyright © katt ... [ 2006-04-18 12:43:48]
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Re: The Waterfall (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:37:39 PM AEST
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Not sure what to make of this but i know i liked it lol. Great write i liked the way it flowed. When you can make someone love a poem they dont even understand you know your good =)

Re: The Waterfall (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 01:38:41 PM AEST
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Quite a beautiful picture you've woven here...
Well done!
Jenni

Re: The Waterfall (User Rating: 1 )
by wizard on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 11:16:56 AM AEST
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i thought this was great...good imagery and flow..keep posting!

wiz

Re: The Waterfall (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 01:20:07 PM AEST
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Bravo. My first read of yours! Ya hooked me. One thing 'bout "best effort" postin'; we now expect a string o' them.

This poem goes personal into your psyche and may lose an unplugged reader once in a while, but those tuned into an introduction of vision, awareness, enlightenment and that miracle o' reborn - they gonna like it!!!!! Great work.

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