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Fill in the blank
Contributed by
the_story_of_the_year
on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 06:20:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
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I see you're hurting
You long to feel the way you used to
Wish you could go back to better days
When you felt you had a purpose in so many ways
But only one was important
Fill in the blank
I wish I was ________
Tell me when you're done
And I'll show you who you've already become
I don't care what they say
Neither should you
But you do anyway
You are what matters
Just remember I'm watching you
And know that I care
Sit back and relax
But know that I'm there to catch you
If you fall from that chair
Give me your hand and I'll show you the air you deserve to breathe
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Re: Fill in the blank
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by Michael_Bevins on
Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 06:37:09 PM AEST
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| Very nice write. Keep it up you got talent. |
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Re: Fill in the blank
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by CuriousitysCat on
Sunday, 7th January 2007 @ 10:40:29 PM AEST
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I wonder, are most of these written about one person in specific? I hope they are worth this kind of devotion. If not to others than definately to you.
Keep writing.
~ThEnD |
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Re: Fill in the blank
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by europeanprincess on
Monday, 5th February 2007 @ 07:55:08 PM AEST
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| this was different and well written. thank you for sharing. |
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