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Array ( [sid] => 118399 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll Always Be True [time] => 2006-04-15 20:46:37 [hometext] => Its the same thing ive been writin' over and over!!!! please read and comment!!! i'll be sure to comment your poems (i've really got to get some new inspiration) I [bodytext] => Every second I'm not with you I'm a mess!
Now that your not here I feel I have less!

You were my everthing, I gave you my all!
Without you I just feel small!

As crazy as it seems,
Your always in my dreams!

Not knowing how to feel,
I wish it were real!

Yes,I still love you,
I'll always be true,
Can you tell me that too?

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I'll Always Be True

Contributed by aegurly on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 08:46:37 PM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Every second I'm not with you I'm a mess!
Now that your not here I feel I have less!

You were my everthing, I gave you my all!
Without you I just feel small!

As crazy as it seems,
Your always in my dreams!

Not knowing how to feel,
I wish it were real!

Yes,I still love you,
I'll always be true,
Can you tell me that too?

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Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by BSteel on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 08:53:40 PM AEST
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very nice flow simple to the point,
and true. good work

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:13:33 PM AEST
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Very nice. I know how you feel. Im such a mess without my love. Love is all I have anymore. well great write. I enjoyed it. Keep up the good work.

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:37:59 PM AEST
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You have the emotion down, but the words lack a bit. Maybe try to be more, flexible, with your words instead of the stiffness that you form your words in. I know what it feels like, to be a total mess without that one and only. It's a good write. ^_^

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:43:49 PM AEST
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good job. I know that feeling its crazy! nice poem i look forward to more ^^

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:02:45 PM AEST
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Very simple, but sweet couplets...
Jenni

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:15:56 PM AEST
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A poetic statement of love, if that’s what you had in mind when you wrote it, friend you have achieved it .
FRANCO

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 11:16:10 PM AEST
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Hey, thanks for the comment. Good write. Sweet and simple. = )

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 01:55:05 AM AEST
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You sure you didn't go through my thoughts. This is how i always feel when i'm not with the one i love. Excellent poem

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo910 on Sunday, 16th April 2006 @ 03:28:20 PM AEST
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AWESOME!!!!!!!! Can I say it again? AWESOME!! I loved will read again & again! Keep up the work! I can so relate! Pm me sum time! Oh & thanx 4 commentin my writes!
-l8ter, Arianna

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by bigduck6769 on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 07:42:09 AM AEST
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this is a nice easy read..
simple and to the point it seems..
good write
=]

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by redtears on Monday, 24th April 2006 @ 08:33:37 PM AEST
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absolutly lovely! i really enjoy reading your writing! if you haven't already, please read some of my other poems, thanks bunches for commenting! and please post more!

Re: I'll Always Be True (User Rating: 1 )
by lillyjane on Thursday, 4th May 2006 @ 11:12:21 AM AEST
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So good you put everything you feel into this and I loved it, xxxxxxx

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