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[title] => Fates on the Highway
[time] => 2006-04-15 14:45:22
[hometext] => I would appreciate constructive comments. Not comments about it being good, or that you like it, but comments that would help me for future poetry. Please and Thank you.
[bodytext] => Does fate decide the highways I run? The pavement is brick but looks as though it was blood Refreshments? Never, but a tall tale told The moon smiling at me as though none ever would It’s tyrannical in this quite belligerent fate Passing in seconds but new forms to create Derogatory terms used to beat my face Conquer my mind but save my beautiful space Why is fate no where near being prim? Leaving everyone’s lives to the grim and violent end I beg you to give me a final chance to smile Please don’t suffocate me in the swift river bend You may preside over me but I have a good reason For you to leave me as though another season That I may fall but I will rise again I will reach out to all and lend them a hand Fate is the flower that blooms for you to smile But dies in an instant; it never remains the same Fates on the highway; we walk a million miles [comments] => 2 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 43 [informant] => hardrocker15198916 [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => oops )
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