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wafts along in vapors of steam
where cascading water lave silken skin
Allured by it's intoxicating fragrance
I make my way to the slightly cracked door
Condensation, trickling down the mirror
creates waterfall visions before my eyes
Through misty haze,
a goddess-like figure materializes
Arms extended upward
like a delicate tropical flower,
drenched in morning dew
opening it's petals at the first hint of sunrise
Smooth buttermilk skin glistening as
crystal-like rivulets spiral downward
along the soft subtle curves of her flesh
Drawing back the flowered curtain
I enter Paradise
immersed in a shower of beauty

Copyright 2006 R.W.
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Tropical Awakening

Contributed by CarolinaBlue on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 05:33:39 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

An aroma of sweet Plumeria
wafts along in vapors of steam
where cascading water lave silken skin
Allured by it's intoxicating fragrance
I make my way to the slightly cracked door
Condensation, trickling down the mirror
creates waterfall visions before my eyes
Through misty haze,
a goddess-like figure materializes
Arms extended upward
like a delicate tropical flower,
drenched in morning dew
opening it's petals at the first hint of sunrise
Smooth buttermilk skin glistening as
crystal-like rivulets spiral downward
along the soft subtle curves of her flesh
Drawing back the flowered curtain
I enter Paradise
immersed in a shower of beauty

Copyright 2006 R.W.

Copyright © CarolinaBlue ... [ 2006-04-14 17:33:39]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: Tropical Awakening (User Rating: 1 )
by Ben_Lace on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 06:54:01 PM AEST
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I liked this poem, really good job

Re: Tropical Awakening (User Rating: 1 )
by sensible_paper on Monday, 12th November 2007 @ 05:04:30 AM AEST
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i enjoyed this poem way to go

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