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Array ( [sid] => 118290 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Frown [time] => 2006-04-14 00:05:11 [hometext] => please Comment I'm falling apart now that yoou broke my heart!!! i'm only 13 enjoy!!!! [bodytext] => What goes up,
Must come down!
What was a smile,
Is now a frown!

I'm falling apart,
Since you broke my heart!

I really need you,
After all I've been through!

I cryed myself dry,
When you said your goodbyes!

I really need you back,
before I crack!

I loved you inside,
But I didn't claim,
Because you didn't feel the same!

I know this sounds lame,
But all I want is for my heart to be put back into,
And for us to be together again because I really love you!!! [comments] => 9 [counter] => 238 [topic] => 22 [informant] => aegurly [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 13 [ratings] => 3 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )
Frown

Contributed by aegurly on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 12:05:11 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove



What goes up,
Must come down!
What was a smile,
Is now a frown!

I'm falling apart,
Since you broke my heart!

I really need you,
After all I've been through!

I cryed myself dry,
When you said your goodbyes!

I really need you back,
before I crack!

I loved you inside,
But I didn't claim,
Because you didn't feel the same!

I know this sounds lame,
But all I want is for my heart to be put back into,
And for us to be together again because I really love you!!!




Copyright © aegurly ... [ 2006-04-14 00:05:11]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by aegurly on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 03:05:24 PM AEST
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will you please comment thanks!!!!!


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by Lips on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 03:49:21 PM AEST
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Gee someone really broke ya heart! Not a bad read at all


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by marylou on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:24:20 PM AEST
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good poem raven keep it up

marylou


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by BabiBoricua314 on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 11:37:30 PM AEST
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wow
that is very powerful
i went through something like that but, i did something i shoudnt have done.. ill give u a hint.. i lost it wen i waz 14 and im 15 now.. guess


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 12:34:32 AM AEST
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All of your poems are written with such feeling. I'm sorry you feel so bad.

Your writing is good! I believe you have a future in writing!

Joanna



Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by Gigi_15 on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 03:39:59 PM AEST
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wow..this is a very awesome poem i like the way it rhymes..and i thought it's kinda cute and also sad:(:( i hope he'll come back ..btw thank u for the comment:D


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by hardrocker15198916 on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 09:39:58 PM AEST
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The whole poem was beautiful expect the ending stanza. Maybe delete it or rewrite it. Good write! I really liked this one.^_^


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by bigduck6769 on Tuesday, 18th April 2006 @ 07:45:23 AM AEST
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i agree with that last person who commented..
this is an amazing poem, but the end is predictable..
great write though..
=]


Re: Frown (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:34:14 PM AEST
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Amazing, Really enjoyed. Thank you. Keep up the great work ;)




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