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Array ( [sid] => 11829 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => The Deepest Secret [time] => 2003-02-02 17:00:00 [hometext] => It won't make sense to you now, but one day it will strike you from nowhere, and you'll never be the same again. [bodytext] => she lay prone
violated by a dozen men of god
reeking of spent passion,
blood, and feces
i wept with fury and sorrow
at the sight of my newly disfigured lover
and i knelt at her side
to offer meaningless comfort
as her life's blood dribbled and spurted away
as i knelt, she beckoned me closer
and i strained to hear her last words to me
with the austere look of death about her
she grasped my shoulder
and spat her four final words
before giving up the ghost
"I hate Mickey Mouse" [comments] => 4 [counter] => 276 [topic] => 13 [informant] => Cancer [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

The Deepest Secret

Contributed by Cancer on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 05:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

she lay prone
violated by a dozen men of god
reeking of spent passion,
blood, and feces
i wept with fury and sorrow
at the sight of my newly disfigured lover
and i knelt at her side
to offer meaningless comfort
as her life's blood dribbled and spurted away
as i knelt, she beckoned me closer
and i strained to hear her last words to me
with the austere look of death about her
she grasped my shoulder
and spat her four final words
before giving up the ghost
"I hate Mickey Mouse"

Copyright © Cancer ... [ 2003-02-02 17:00:00]
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Re: The Deepest Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 05:14:48 PM AEST
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lmao, wonderful, wonderful, took me totally by surprise, love it

Re: The Deepest Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 02:22:13 AM AEST
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I dont know if this was meant to be funny, but it was good. What do u mean by, 'violated by a dozen men of god'? Great poem...

Your friend,
Joel

Re: The Deepest Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by Cancer on Sunday, 9th February 2003 @ 08:52:04 AM AEST
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she was raped by the upper echelon of the local church.

51

Re: The Deepest Secret (User Rating: 1 )
by lilch4ever on Tuesday, 3rd June 2003 @ 12:13:05 AM AEST
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That was good but yet a little confusing. Nice write though.

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