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Array ( [sid] => 118212 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => LOVE [time] => 2006-04-12 16:31:17 [hometext] => A poem I wrote to my girlfriend to say I LOVE YOU BABY. [bodytext] => I want to be here for you
In sickness and in health
I want to read my wedding vowls
In poverty or in wealth

I want to spark a great desire
within your soul
Looking into your deep eyes
I see what truely lies
Beneath all your scars
I see true beauty

Having to bite my lip
To keep from kissing you
everytime you smile

You bring me peace
Oh baby please
Dont fade to grey
Ill take you all the way

Im always here
In pain and fear
I long to be with you
Every part of me screaming
That look on your face
O how it brings me to grace

I love you more then youll ever know
The hardest part is trying to show
You that you mean soo much to me
I dont know what to do
I just want to fall to my knees
Im lost in fear and confusion
Never felt this way before
Not sure what to do
Maybe i should just say
I love you! [comments] => 6 [counter] => 170 [topic] => 2 [informant] => Michael_Bevins [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

LOVE

Contributed by Michael_Bevins on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:31:17 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I want to be here for you
In sickness and in health
I want to read my wedding vowls
In poverty or in wealth

I want to spark a great desire
within your soul
Looking into your deep eyes
I see what truely lies
Beneath all your scars
I see true beauty

Having to bite my lip
To keep from kissing you
everytime you smile

You bring me peace
Oh baby please
Dont fade to grey
Ill take you all the way

Im always here
In pain and fear
I long to be with you
Every part of me screaming
That look on your face
O how it brings me to grace

I love you more then youll ever know
The hardest part is trying to show
You that you mean soo much to me
I dont know what to do
I just want to fall to my knees
Im lost in fear and confusion
Never felt this way before
Not sure what to do
Maybe i should just say
I love you!

Copyright © Michael_Bevins ... [ 2006-04-12 16:31:17]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilly-Quill on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 06:05:25 PM AEST
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Churchill once said: "Before you can inspire with emotion, you must be swamped with it yourself. Before you can move their tears, your own must flow. To convince them, you must yourself believe." Really, I think you're off to a great start (he-he).

Passionate, and provocatively honest!
~Lilly-Quill

Re: LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 06:10:34 PM AEST
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Thanks fr the comment. they are really appriciated

Re: LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by poetrygirl1991 on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 07:49:45 PM AEST
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awwe* this is a very good poem..and indeed its very cute..best of wishes that you two will remain together forever keep writing!

~Chrissy

Re: LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by twick on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 10:40:00 PM AEST
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I usually don't like this kind of poetry because it can sound really cliche but this was really good. It was open and it made me give the "awww" response with sincerity

Re: LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by Eternal_Dreamer on Wednesday, 19th April 2006 @ 06:46:15 PM AEST
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~*Michael*~
This is a beautiful, uplifting and touching write. I like the way you've written this it touches one at the core. Well done.
*warm huggers*
~*suzie Q*~

Re: LOVE (User Rating: 1 )
by oreo910 on Thursday, 20th April 2006 @ 04:07:46 PM AEST
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Hey, Mike this 1 waz let me say it loud & clear AWESOME! I can just c the look of luv u hav 2wards ur grl wit every word every line! U seem like a sweetheart keep up the writin!
L8ter, Arianna

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