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Array ( [sid] => 118208 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Walking Away [time] => 2006-04-12 14:14:09 [hometext] => my first poem in almost a year and a half. [bodytext] => My heart is not what it used to be
Shattered by your lack of wanting to be with me
I don’t know how you could pass me up so easily
After what I went through to be with you
You said there was something missing from the start
Now I realize it was your heart
So I had to say good bye
Now all I can do is fight these familiar feelings of wanting to die
Everything I see reminds me of you
The places we went, things we saw
Come flooding back to nail me against the wall
The music I hear brings tears to my eyes
I cry now for what I’ve lost
For now my heart just simply rots
No more will I wake to your embrace
I’m shattered now
Distraught from all this pain
I don’t hate you for what you’ve done
You were my sun
But time’s moved on and that sun has set
Darkness now tries to creep back in
I fear my final fight is about to begin [comments] => 4 [counter] => 219 [topic] => 48 [informant] => spyndl [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )

Walking Away

Contributed by spyndl on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 02:14:09 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

My heart is not what it used to be
Shattered by your lack of wanting to be with me
I don’t know how you could pass me up so easily
After what I went through to be with you
You said there was something missing from the start
Now I realize it was your heart
So I had to say good bye
Now all I can do is fight these familiar feelings of wanting to die
Everything I see reminds me of you
The places we went, things we saw
Come flooding back to nail me against the wall
The music I hear brings tears to my eyes
I cry now for what I’ve lost
For now my heart just simply rots
No more will I wake to your embrace
I’m shattered now
Distraught from all this pain
I don’t hate you for what you’ve done
You were my sun
But time’s moved on and that sun has set
Darkness now tries to creep back in
I fear my final fight is about to begin

Copyright Â© spyndl ... [ 2006-04-12 14:14:09]
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Re: Walking Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Alison on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:07:59 PM AEST
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when the darkness of night sets in just look up and you will see the stars! wonderful write, full of meaning and pain....

Re: Walking Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Michael_Bevins on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 04:36:40 PM AEST
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Reminds me of myself. Great poem, keep it up.

Re: Walking Away (User Rating: 1 )
by whiteleo1984 on Thursday, 13th April 2006 @ 12:04:33 AM AEST
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full of pain and strong emotions... i understand how u feel but u need 2 remember that the stars r still visible thru those clouds

Re: Walking Away (User Rating: 1 )
by Spike on Monday, 23rd February 2009 @ 02:31:22 AM AEST
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Ain't it always the way. Don't worry - it's the next one that kills ya. Top write, by the way, and very heartfelt.

Spike

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