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Array ( [sid] => 118153 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Goodbye for Now and Collide [time] => 2006-04-11 18:36:02 [hometext] => These two poems go hand in hand, because I wrote them at the same time, so I didn't want to post them separatly. A lot of people liked them, so comment at will! [bodytext] =>

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Goodbye for Now

Goodbye for now,
write it down
and forget it,
burn it,
erase it.
No more pain,
but the hard part is
letting it go.
A knife in the back
hands holding you down,
you say:
Goodbye for now.
Whispers of death
suspended in time
and history
written in books
and buried in the ground
and you say:
Goodbye for now.
Rain brings the life.
Rain brings your sorrow.
You're locked and chained,
he has a gun to your head
but you never scream
you just look on as
he pulls the trigger.
Darkness floods.
Light snaps back,
and you say:
Goodbye for now.

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Goodbye for Now and Collide

Contributed by MG_Akela22090 on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:36:02 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

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Goodbye for Now

Goodbye for now,
write it down
and forget it,
burn it,
erase it.
No more pain,
but the hard part is
letting it go.
A knife in the back
hands holding you down,
you say:
Goodbye for now.
Whispers of death
suspended in time
and history
written in books
and buried in the ground
and you say:
Goodbye for now.
Rain brings the life.
Rain brings your sorrow.
You're locked and chained,
he has a gun to your head
but you never scream
you just look on as
he pulls the trigger.
Darkness floods.
Light snaps back,
and you say:
Goodbye for now.

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Copyright © MG_Akela22090 ... [ 2006-04-11 18:36:02]
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Re: Goodbye for Now and Collide (User Rating: 1 )
by drtylilsecret on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 06:49:17 PM AEST
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wow. that was really good. i especially loved the 2nd one cause i could relate to it, but yeah. absolutely loved it, amazing write.

~natalya

Re: Goodbye for Now and Collide (User Rating: 1 )
by aegurly on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 08:42:10 PM AEST
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hey neat write

check out The sickness by aegurly

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