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Saviour of a Magical World

Contributed by StoneAngel on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 01:55:45 AM in AEST
Topic: fantasy



Laughter all around the campfire
dancing a jig to some folk song
singing merry songs
will night falls
stars of bright blue fall
lighting up the night sky
The mark of the end or new beginnings

This night was foretold
by dagon mages and seers old
The Children come
To save these lands of old

The First is the Child of Blood
dark and mysterious
sniffing out evil and vanquashing it.

Next comes the Child of Earth
Strong and bold
The protector of all earthbound

The last and most poweful of all
The Child of the Sky
The star singer
The one who will save them all

There is one more with all those 3
but never really told
He is the 4th and least powerfull of all
He is the Child of Water
The bringer of life

When all four unite
into one child
great joy will unite all the lands
and save the world
From the demons

This Child of Elemental Power
Will have the strength of the earth
to move mountains
The Child will have the swiftness of air/blood
to move out of opponents hands
Ethreal to bind the evil of the land
And water to bring back life
to a world in termul

These 4 will combine and save one world
and all because of a shooting star on that faithful night.




Copyright © StoneAngel ... [ 2006-04-11 01:55:45]
(Date/Time posted on site)





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Re: Saviour of a Magical World (User Rating: 1 )
by Jackee_line on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 05:07:36 AM AEST
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very nice , a joy to read


Re: Saviour of a Magical World (User Rating: 1 )
by TheStoryTeller on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 05:25:12 AM AEST
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Fantastic Write, I really liked this one!


Re: Saviour of a Magical World (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Tuesday, 11th April 2006 @ 11:36:40 AM AEST
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That was pretty good. I will be happy to read the next chapter of this epic




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