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Array ( [sid] => 118067 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The truth behind us [time] => 2006-04-10 08:27:44 [hometext] => .... [bodytext] => You think that you know me, but you really dont,
How could you know me, when I dont know myself,

You say that you love me, but I know thats untrue,
Why do you insist on torturing me, with all these lies,

You act like you need me, but I dont see how,
Why would you need me, If you've survived this long without,

I think you dont know me, but maybe you do,
Is it possiable you could know me, better then I myself,

I say i dont love you, but it feels like a lie,
Why do i insist on always pushing you away,

I act like I dont need you, but i think that i might,
Why cant i just get over, this barrier I face,

.......and let you in.

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The truth behind us

Contributed by -why_not_let_me_live- on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 08:27:44 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

You think that you know me, but you really dont,
How could you know me, when I dont know myself,

You say that you love me, but I know thats untrue,
Why do you insist on torturing me, with all these lies,

You act like you need me, but I dont see how,
Why would you need me, If you've survived this long without,

I think you dont know me, but maybe you do,
Is it possiable you could know me, better then I myself,

I say i dont love you, but it feels like a lie,
Why do i insist on always pushing you away,

I act like I dont need you, but i think that i might,
Why cant i just get over, this barrier I face,

.......and let you in.

Copyright © -why_not_let_me_live- ... [ 2006-04-10 08:27:44]
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Re: The truth behind us (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 03:52:58 PM AEST
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Nice and Clear.
I enjoyed it.
I still can't imagine, since I haven't had any one who loves me, but in the part:

You act like you need me, but I dont see how,
Why would you need me, If you've survived this long without,

That is my fav. Part I find it honestly really truthfull.
Yes, people are always saying: "I need you so much" and you are right, they have survived so long without that person, how may they lie like that.

Nice Writing.

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