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I will not be
that person sits
inside of me
I'll take each beat
of time away
Yet I will be
each single day
Holding on
to every breath
I treasure help
with bated breath
caressing then
soles lonely heart
I'm glued to hold
will not part
Calling glimpses
of a saltry moon
I ask His guidence
in a tragic tune
Cramping life
into ones own being
I sit realising
I'm never seeing
Cradeling babe
in tender arms
Soft one's touch
in feathered palms
Binding whispers
with ones brandied kiss
I hold forlong
and I heavily miss
Forever young
this babe will be
I trust in God
will one day see
~~XXxXX~~ [comments] => 5 [counter] => 197 [topic] => 39 [informant] => inoc [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 10 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 0 [associated] => [topicname] => Grief )

Forever Young

Contributed by inoc on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 08:09:09 AM in AEST
Topic: Grief

This day I wake
I will not be
that person sits
inside of me
I'll take each beat
of time away
Yet I will be
each single day
Holding on
to every breath
I treasure help
with bated breath
caressing then
soles lonely heart
I'm glued to hold
will not part
Calling glimpses
of a saltry moon
I ask His guidence
in a tragic tune
Cramping life
into ones own being
I sit realising
I'm never seeing
Cradeling babe
in tender arms
Soft one's touch
in feathered palms
Binding whispers
with ones brandied kiss
I hold forlong
and I heavily miss
Forever young
this babe will be
I trust in God
will one day see
~~XXxXX~~

Copyright © inoc ... [ 2006-04-10 08:09:09]
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Re: Forever Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_K on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 09:31:23 AM AEST
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I've missed your poems, Coni. Good to see you again. This is nicely done.
Jenni

Re: Forever Young (User Rating: 1 )
by ripshark on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 02:00:03 PM AEST
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very nice poem - I liked the style it's written in.

Re: Forever Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Monday, 10th April 2006 @ 02:50:36 PM AEST
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One of my favorite movies..

Your words are so blended so carefully and exactly, a reader can squint to the middle and feel a heart booming full of love.. You are a wonderul, and most beautiful writer, cherished by our Lord, I thank you so very much. Love and hugs, RaquelLeah

Re: Forever Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 14th April 2006 @ 08:33:05 AM AEST
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Firstly I must commend you on an excellent title!

reminds me...

I too have written a poem of the same name,

But i've never shown it to anybody i'll have to hunt it out!

This is a good piece written in a very unique style.

J

Re: Forever Young (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Saturday, 20th May 2006 @ 08:38:05 AM AEST
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This touches the heart in many ways it holds
an impecable thruth that hits 2 close to home
it certainly touched me. very effective peice of poetry.

Ben

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