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Array ( [sid] => 11805 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => Mummy [time] => 2003-02-01 23:40:00 [hometext] => something i wrote today...the she is my sister...it's not a very good poem but i poured my tears into this... [bodytext] => I wish, I wish I knew how to make you love me
Wish I had what she has, wish I could make you proud
I’ve tried so hard, and I’m so sorry
Please, don’t start again, I can’t take it

Lying here, trying to work out what I did wrong
Curled up on the sofa, crying whilst you scream at me
Covering my broken eyes with my hands
I’m so sorry, I’ll never do it again

Shouting at me, and all I can do is apologise,
Close my eyes and wait for you to get bored
I don’t even know what I did this time
Tears on my face and I just want to crawl away

I’m so sorry mummy, for not bring pretty enough
I never meant to get bad grades in school
I’m sorry I wasn’t as good as her,
I never meant to mummy, I never meant to

I’ll go and do my jobs now mummy,
Please, stop shouting, I can’t do this
One time too many, I’m so sad inside
I’m so sorry
I’ll do anything, please, just tell me that you love me [comments] => 7 [counter] => 275 [topic] => 13 [informant] => wyrd_faerie [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 9 [ratings] => 2 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )

Mummy

Contributed by wyrd_faerie on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:40:00 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry

I wish, I wish I knew how to make you love me
Wish I had what she has, wish I could make you proud
I’ve tried so hard, and I’m so sorry
Please, don’t start again, I can’t take it

Lying here, trying to work out what I did wrong
Curled up on the sofa, crying whilst you scream at me
Covering my broken eyes with my hands
I’m so sorry, I’ll never do it again

Shouting at me, and all I can do is apologise,
Close my eyes and wait for you to get bored
I don’t even know what I did this time
Tears on my face and I just want to crawl away

I’m so sorry mummy, for not bring pretty enough
I never meant to get bad grades in school
I’m sorry I wasn’t as good as her,
I never meant to mummy, I never meant to

I’ll go and do my jobs now mummy,
Please, stop shouting, I can’t do this
One time too many, I’m so sad inside
I’m so sorry
I’ll do anything, please, just tell me that you love me

Copyright Â© wyrd_faerie ... [ 2003-02-01 23:40:00]
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Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by bobotheclown on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 12:12:57 AM AEST
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Oh Lucie this is just simply so sad.
Covering my broken eyes with my hands
That line just really stood out to me. You have such a way with writing. a lot of pain and emotion was put into this I enjoyed it alot. Keep writing and I hope things are better now.

Your friend,
Joel

Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 11:48:58 AM AEST
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big huggs and love..hope your feeling happier soon..........

Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by roisin on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 01:33:00 PM AEST
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so sad..wishing your situation improves...keep writing...
rosie

Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by M on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 11:35:17 AM AEST
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o baby, i love you so much, it is an amazing poem. to me darlin, you are one million times 'better' than your sister, your the best thing in the world to me, you mean so much. O lu, we're guna get out of this, and things will be better one day, i promise you. all my love, forever, MxXx

Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by wolfflow on Monday, 3rd February 2003 @ 04:35:32 PM AEST
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you're right its not a good poem, but its great expression, sometimes you gotta write your way out of a situation, surprised you dont get the grades, some of your poetry reveals an awesome intelligence, keep it up, big hug, please, dont just read those words, feel them, a lot of people care for you

Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by Darkscorpio on Saturday, 8th February 2003 @ 04:38:09 PM AEST
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That breaks my heart. My thoughts are with you. Make yourself stronger...you'll figure out how to do it eventually. Use the words in your poems, use the poems that you read. Just don't give up.

Re: Mummy (User Rating: 1 )
by cryingonmyporch on Wednesday, 23rd April 2003 @ 11:28:40 PM AEST
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It is some what like mine. I'm sorry you have had to go thru something so horrible. In some crude way knowing someone else is just as sad and hurt as me makes feel not so alone. it is a very good Write
Amy

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