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Array ( [sid] => 11804 [catid] => 1 [aid] => Mick [title] => please dont take this one [time] => 2003-02-01 23:20:00 [hometext] => [bodytext] => we look at things,,
we see thing,,
we want things,,
but we have to learn,,
that it is given,
not taken,,
like love,,

we know the rights from wrong,,
but we still do it,,
we steal love,,
we take love,,
but love is given freely,,
to those who recieve it,

we most learn from it,,
not to take what isn't ours,,
we must learn,,
that its given without reason,,
its given to those who deserve it,,
someone with heart,,

love isn't a game,,
it more precious,than any stone,,
any,,one man or woman alive,,
its a gift to that one person,,
we must cherish it,,
to obtain it,,
if not we lose,,
the greatest gift of them all,,

remember that it's given,,
not taken,,
it's a gift to some one,,
and not yours,to take,,
one love,,one life to be for ever,
remember that we as people ,,
have the right to ask for whats ours,,
please dont take the love that i have,,

everybody deserves the right to love once,,,
let them have this one,,
they deserve this kind of love,,
forever if possible,,,

caig s. meeks [comments] => 3 [counter] => 181 [topic] => 2 [informant] => spooky [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )
please dont take this one

Contributed by spooky on Saturday, 1st February 2003 @ 11:20:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



we look at things,,
we see thing,,
we want things,,
but we have to learn,,
that it is given,
not taken,,
like love,,

we know the rights from wrong,,
but we still do it,,
we steal love,,
we take love,,
but love is given freely,,
to those who recieve it,

we most learn from it,,
not to take what isn't ours,,
we must learn,,
that its given without reason,,
its given to those who deserve it,,
someone with heart,,

love isn't a game,,
it more precious,than any stone,,
any,,one man or woman alive,,
its a gift to that one person,,
we must cherish it,,
to obtain it,,
if not we lose,,
the greatest gift of them all,,

remember that it's given,,
not taken,,
it's a gift to some one,,
and not yours,to take,,
one love,,one life to be for ever,
remember that we as people ,,
have the right to ask for whats ours,,
please dont take the love that i have,,

everybody deserves the right to love once,,,
let them have this one,,
they deserve this kind of love,,
forever if possible,,,

caig s. meeks




Copyright © spooky ... [ 2003-02-01 23:20:00]
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Re: please dont take this one (User Rating: 1 )
by ladyfawn on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 11:41:15 AM AEST
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sweet write...


Re: please dont take this one (User Rating: 1 )
by renee on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 11:55:27 AM AEST
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that is so sweet did you write this for some you love she is a very lucky girl keep on writing you seem to be a very sweet person


Re: please dont take this one (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Sunday, 2nd February 2003 @ 07:33:57 PM AEST
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Craig,what a nice poem & so very true!
I liked this again! Christina




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