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Array ( [sid] => 118009 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => The wait [time] => 2006-04-09 11:43:24 [hometext] => someone told me to submit this, i wasnt really sure- its not one of my favourites [bodytext] => Waiting for you to call me,
Waiting for you to respond,
Waiting for you to realise,
Waiting for you to turn,

Do you not see me?
Do you not notice?
Can you not feel it?
Or are you just a tease.

Why are you doing this?
Is this done deliberately?
Are you getting a kick,
In trying to hurt me.

You turned, you see me
You’ve looked into my eyes
My heart just skipped a beat
I think you realised

We talk and we talk
We’re like the closest of friends
And then you turn your back on me
And I start the painful wait again.
[comments] => 2 [counter] => 227 [topic] => 22 [informant] => moloko [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LostLove )

The wait

Contributed by moloko on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 11:43:24 AM in AEST
Topic: LostLove

Waiting for you to call me,
Waiting for you to respond,
Waiting for you to realise,
Waiting for you to turn,

Do you not see me?
Do you not notice?
Can you not feel it?
Or are you just a tease.

Why are you doing this?
Is this done deliberately?
Are you getting a kick,
In trying to hurt me.

You turned, you see me
You’ve looked into my eyes
My heart just skipped a beat
I think you realised

We talk and we talk
We’re like the closest of friends
And then you turn your back on me
And I start the painful wait again.

Copyright Â© moloko ... [ 2006-04-09 11:43:24]
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Re: The wait (User Rating: 1 )
by TiaXander on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 09:16:14 PM AEST
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Ahhhhh NO THIS WAS NOT ME! errr okay fine yes this was me and in a way still is....I was an in some ways am the person your poem says. Heh almost to close to home my words of wisdom.....Ahem yeah got nothing...zip...nada...zero. Writing thats my only advice helps big time just let go and unleash the unexpected.

Re: The wait (User Rating: 1 )
by wheels on Monday, 23rd June 2008 @ 02:41:53 AM AEST
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Oh how those we love have an endless supply of pain to dish our way - like we are worthless - that we never matter or ever mattered - i feel you - truly i do.
I am in a dark place my self right now.

--kevin
the lonely vagabond

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