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Array ( [sid] => 118005 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Shakey Vibes Between Us [time] => 2006-04-09 10:25:40 [hometext] => When all you need to be happy, is to leave [bodytext] => The vibe between us
Now...is quite shakey
We never have nothing to discuss
I really havent been feeling right lately
I wish I didnt feel this way
I wish I was kidding
But the truth is what I say
And its exactly what your getting
You never think about by generous ways and my ..good heart
And you never want to admit that your wrong..But ..you should start
It's like I'm driving down a broken road
The outcome is inevidable
I know I gotta go
This love no longer is incredible
I shoulda did what my mother said
Shoulda listened when she told me to leave
But I guess this is what I get
Letting your words decieve
I'm so surprised you never captured the moment while you could
But its been too long
And I told you that once I'm gone
I'm gone for good
That good lovin that you used to get
That special treatment that you didnt deserve
You can just forget
And thats my word
I'm not a toy
So you can't push my buttons
We tried to work it out boy
But yet we still come up with nothing
So lets just throw in the towel and settle this decentley
We both know
That we havnt been clickin recentley
Its time to go
Yea I said it...I'm leaving








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Shakey Vibes Between Us

Contributed by poetic_influence on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:25:40 AM in AEST
Topic: goodbyepoetry



The vibe between us
Now...is quite shakey
We never have nothing to discuss
I really havent been feeling right lately
I wish I didnt feel this way
I wish I was kidding
But the truth is what I say
And its exactly what your getting
You never think about by generous ways and my ..good heart
And you never want to admit that your wrong..But ..you should start
It's like I'm driving down a broken road
The outcome is inevidable
I know I gotta go
This love no longer is incredible
I shoulda did what my mother said
Shoulda listened when she told me to leave
But I guess this is what I get
Letting your words decieve
I'm so surprised you never captured the moment while you could
But its been too long
And I told you that once I'm gone
I'm gone for good
That good lovin that you used to get
That special treatment that you didnt deserve
You can just forget
And thats my word
I'm not a toy
So you can't push my buttons
We tried to work it out boy
But yet we still come up with nothing
So lets just throw in the towel and settle this decentley
We both know
That we havnt been clickin recentley
Its time to go
Yea I said it...I'm leaving












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Re: Shakey Vibes Between Us (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:34:23 AM AEST
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I like this. Good job. You go girl.




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