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Array ( [sid] => 117978 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => the sky, and the water [time] => 2006-04-08 22:00:20 [hometext] => [bodytext] => misery has a way of finding me.
i never got far with her.
but the beautiful sunset makes all well.
the clouds, are symmetrical.
the sun will descend like dwindling hope.

morning air, in my hair.
i try my hardest not to stare, because i know you dont care.
spare me a minute, or two..there is so much we could do.
stare into the flailing sky, as the clouds dissipate.
nature is the parallel to you and me, me and you.

i prove to you, that none of this is true.
blanket in the grass, i let time just pass.
gaze into the sea, translucent colors open my eyes.
i wish your were the same, i wish i could see right through you.
but the light doesnt transfer through your flesh.

i was thinking maybe, i will always be alone.
when there is no calls, no more messages to hear.
then i step outside and look at the stars perfectly aligned.
go to church, confess my sins, maybe my luck will change.
because maybe i am the one to blame, maybe i am at fault.
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the sky, and the water

Contributed by frmpoison2static on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 10:00:20 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry

misery has a way of finding me.
i never got far with her.
but the beautiful sunset makes all well.
the clouds, are symmetrical.
the sun will descend like dwindling hope.

morning air, in my hair.
i try my hardest not to stare, because i know you dont care.
spare me a minute, or two..there is so much we could do.
stare into the flailing sky, as the clouds dissipate.
nature is the parallel to you and me, me and you.

i prove to you, that none of this is true.
blanket in the grass, i let time just pass.
gaze into the sea, translucent colors open my eyes.
i wish your were the same, i wish i could see right through you.
but the light doesnt transfer through your flesh.

i was thinking maybe, i will always be alone.
when there is no calls, no more messages to hear.
then i step outside and look at the stars perfectly aligned.
go to church, confess my sins, maybe my luck will change.
because maybe i am the one to blame, maybe i am at fault.

Copyright © frmpoison2static ... [ 2006-04-08 22:00:20]
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Re: the sky, and the water (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:21:34 AM AEST
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Wow this was an enormously intense write, full of emotion and racing with passion. A superior use of metaphors. I will be looking out for more work by you. This was extremely impressive.

Bravo!

SCM

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