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the sky, and the water
Contributed by
frmpoison2static
on
Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 10:00:20 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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misery has a way of finding me.
i never got far with her.
but the beautiful sunset makes all well.
the clouds, are symmetrical.
the sun will descend like dwindling hope.
morning air, in my hair.
i try my hardest not to stare, because i know you dont care.
spare me a minute, or two..there is so much we could do.
stare into the flailing sky, as the clouds dissipate.
nature is the parallel to you and me, me and you.
i prove to you, that none of this is true.
blanket in the grass, i let time just pass.
gaze into the sea, translucent colors open my eyes.
i wish your were the same, i wish i could see right through you.
but the light doesnt transfer through your flesh.
i was thinking maybe, i will always be alone.
when there is no calls, no more messages to hear.
then i step outside and look at the stars perfectly aligned.
go to church, confess my sins, maybe my luck will change.
because maybe i am the one to blame, maybe i am at fault.
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Re: the sky, and the water
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 01:21:34 AM AEST (User
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Wow this was an enormously intense write, full of emotion and racing with passion. A superior use of metaphors. I will be looking out for more work by you. This was extremely impressive.
Bravo!
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