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A soul of passion and joy.
Death smiles at the earth,
but you embrace our dreams.
Many secrets are buried in our tears
and you rid them with your smiles.
The sound of poetry is your voice,
and paradise is your presence.
Just thinking of you redefines my vision of love.

Behind each scar lies a story,
Every day has it's yesterday.
But one day, I’ll be never lonely again.
I'm dreaming of the day when I can be with you. [comments] => 9 [counter] => 237 [topic] => 2 [informant] => AdamChantell [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 20 [ratings] => 4 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => LovePoetry )

My Last Poem

Contributed by AdamChantell on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:01:13 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

I writing this for a angel,
A soul of passion and joy.
Death smiles at the earth,
but you embrace our dreams.
Many secrets are buried in our tears
and you rid them with your smiles.
The sound of poetry is your voice,
and paradise is your presence.
Just thinking of you redefines my vision of love.

Behind each scar lies a story,
Every day has it's yesterday.
But one day, I’ll be never lonely again.
I'm dreaming of the day when I can be with you.

Copyright Â© AdamChantell ... [ 2006-04-08 17:01:13]
(Date/Time posted on site)

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Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by BRIDGI on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:20:36 PM AEST
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WHY IS THIS YOUR LAST POEM?I LIKE YOUR POEM ITS REAL MEANNINGFUL.MABEY YOU CAN READ MY POEM CALLDE TOO LATE.WELL GREAT POEM. KEEP WRITING!!!
*PM ME**PERSONAL MESSAGE*
BRIDGETTE/BRIDGI

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 06:28:13 PM AEST
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thanks :D

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by luckedout on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 06:50:42 PM AEST
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Shame to see you go, i really enjoyed the poem, means as much to me as one of my own.

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Lilly-Quill on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 07:31:25 PM AEST
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What an enchanting dream-seed of Love's light and desire. Eloquently ascribe, I can appreciate the deep expression of personal longing.

Regards, Lilly-Quill*~

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by marichris on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 07:57:04 PM AEST
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why your last poem??

anyhow i love the lines:
Many secrets are buried in our tears
Behind each scar lies a story,
Every day has it's yesterday.

very strong lines

oh yeah you might want to edit 'for an angel'

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:51:42 PM AEST
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i forgot how to edit a poem on this site but thanks for catching the grammar error. thank you guys for comments :D

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 02:59:42 AM AEST
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this is my last poem because i need to concentrate on my feelings and learn to listen to them. it's hard for me to write anymore. i can post stuff i have writen lately, but it drains me to write a poem now a days.

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by Kunoichi on Wednesday, 12th April 2006 @ 05:39:27 PM AEST
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At the beginning of it you put "I writing this..." so you might want to fix that. It's a really good poem. Do you care if I use that for something? *p.m. me*

Please do find it in yourself to keep writing cuz that was really good. Best of luck,

Kuno

P.S. Please read my poem "The Price of Love" and tell me what you think. ^.^

Re: My Last Poem (User Rating: 1 )
by AdamChantell on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 10:46:39 AM AEST
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i will continue to write, its just there was a time where i could not keep writing. (hence why i have not been on here.) i needed time to capture my thoughts and feelings. so i came up with "my last poem"

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