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I used to think love was just a game
But its not something you can win
It takes you then breaks you within
Makes you sick to wake up everyday
Makes you sick to think everyday
I cant face myself anymore I don’t know me
I’ve changed into evil you wouldn’t want to see
Every moment everyday seems like a lifetime
I cant wait anymore I hate time
I hate the way you look at me with those beautiful eyes
I hate the way you smile its what I despise
Don’t be nice to me
Don’t speak so sweetly
Do something worse than breaking my heart
That way I wont cry when we’re apart

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don't speak so sweetly

Contributed by candyistoo-sweet on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 06:06:18 AM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry

Giving up surrendering to the pain
I used to think love was just a game
But its not something you can win
It takes you then breaks you within
Makes you sick to wake up everyday
Makes you sick to think everyday
I cant face myself anymore I don’t know me
I’ve changed into evil you wouldn’t want to see
Every moment everyday seems like a lifetime
I cant wait anymore I hate time
I hate the way you look at me with those beautiful eyes
I hate the way you smile its what I despise
Don’t be nice to me
Don’t speak so sweetly
Do something worse than breaking my heart
That way I wont cry when we’re apart

Copyright Â© candyistoo-sweet ... [ 2006-04-08 06:06:18]
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Re: don't speak so sweetly (User Rating: 1 )
by FRANCO on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 07:44:22 AM AEST
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Love though is painful yet is a sweet sensation; one must learn to drink the bitter potion of love to be intoxicated.
wonderful poem.
FRANCO

Re: don't speak so sweetly (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:30:00 PM AEST
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very good

Tiff

Re: don't speak so sweetly (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 04:12:51 PM AEST
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So true Sandy dear...........a fine line between love and I don't like you!
Well written poem Sandy, conveying your feelings once again, and this time, I too felt them which is what every poet hopes to accomplish.........that their reader can go on the same journey as they!
I liked it very much...........love with your sleeve, and make sure they won't hurt you, then include your heart.........that way you won't get hurt!
Warm love
Lovingcritters
consue

Re: don't speak so sweetly (User Rating: 1 )
by JGB on Sunday, 9th April 2006 @ 10:49:03 AM AEST
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Good write. I really like this.

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