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Array ( [sid] => 117925 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => i thought i was done [time] => 2006-04-08 05:24:27 [hometext] => well i like this guy jesse but i am too scared to like him, or anyone for that matter, i dont even know who i am. i dont mean to offend with my language i cant help expressing myself with these words [bodytext] => I freaking thought I was done
You tell me that I’m pretty; I’m the one
I fall for all your charm and wit
I’m delusional for thinking I could handle this *****
I am scared out of my ******* mind
I want to run far away, I want to out-run time
Maybe I wont have to commit
If I tell you the truth, I am really scared of it
I fear to be crazy and in love like all those stupid whores
I want to be sane like I was when I was puking in bowls
When I was on things I couldn’t pronounce
When I got so drunk, that I thought I could bounce
When I jumped off that house with all my stupid friends
And john broke his leg when it hit that stupid fence
But he was too big for me and Michelle to carry
I went to get help while I was laughing, it was scary
But I was so numb and didn’t notice I was caught
Trespassing and being arrested couldn’t get me out
Get me out of this life that was full of mistakes
Let me do’ over all those times I was baked
If I could learn how to live normal when I was young
Maybe I wouldn’t be scared to hear words roll off your tongue
I wouldn’t be scared to love your stupid face
I wouldn’t be scared to leave this world without a trace
But I don’t want to break your heart I care too much
I don’t know why, I don’t even like like myself much


[comments] => 3 [counter] => 186 [topic] => 48 [informant] => candyistoo-sweet [notes] => Edited due to the use of bad language. Please remember that this is a family site and children may be reading. - Moderator_16 [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
i thought i was done

Contributed by candyistoo-sweet on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:24:27 AM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



I freaking thought I was done
You tell me that I’m pretty; I’m the one
I fall for all your charm and wit
I’m delusional for thinking I could handle this *****
I am scared out of my ******* mind
I want to run far away, I want to out-run time
Maybe I wont have to commit
If I tell you the truth, I am really scared of it
I fear to be crazy and in love like all those stupid whores
I want to be sane like I was when I was puking in bowls
When I was on things I couldn’t pronounce
When I got so drunk, that I thought I could bounce
When I jumped off that house with all my stupid friends
And john broke his leg when it hit that stupid fence
But he was too big for me and Michelle to carry
I went to get help while I was laughing, it was scary
But I was so numb and didn’t notice I was caught
Trespassing and being arrested couldn’t get me out
Get me out of this life that was full of mistakes
Let me do’ over all those times I was baked
If I could learn how to live normal when I was young
Maybe I wouldn’t be scared to hear words roll off your tongue
I wouldn’t be scared to love your stupid face
I wouldn’t be scared to leave this world without a trace
But I don’t want to break your heart I care too much
I don’t know why, I don’t even like like myself much






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Re: i thought i was done (User Rating: 1 )
by mischild on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 05:36:06 AM AEST
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Wow!


Re: i thought i was done (User Rating: 1 )
by Tiffyo4 on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 12:33:02 PM AEST
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nice picture

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Re: i thought i was done (User Rating: 1 )
by lovingcritters on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 04:09:45 PM AEST
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WELCOME SANDY TO YPDC!
We are so glad to have a board!
This was a wonderful and expressive poem. You laid your feelings bare, and of course for poets that's not rare!
Good work Sandy............keep it up!
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