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[title] => Hmm you know who you are
[time] => 2006-04-08 02:42:28
[hometext] => oh this girl long ago who wasn't real at all
[bodytext] => Beautiful young people are accidents of nature....don't let your looks get the best of you boo , your problems are not problems but rather a solution to the situation that exists, experiences are not to determine the future but rather it's a victory claimed over what was, how is it that you meet someone and they seem so perfect and you know it would never work but still give them the benefit of the doubt, everyday people lie to God and they are forgiven but it hurts when you lie to yourself being in the image of the creator, looks are meant to get you over the bar on the physical aspect but it's ones experiences that rather shapes the outer and inner looks and that itself is an advantage over any physical beauty the world disposes, the difference is that we both are the same when it comes to looks, we could have anybody we desire, never judge the book by its cover because it's what's wriiten inside that is dangerous to the human soul, i felt it was too good to be true but i try to lie to myself that it wasn't until i started to read the inside of your book that i come to realize that you were just like the opposites before... you know me, i'm always at the right place at the wrong time (wink, wink, wink), like a ghost that passes through time, time and time again i live through it... you know who you are? "pain is temporary, pride is forever, though my heart was murdered, it still beats, Thank you for the fake times'.... i hope you enjoy yourself this weekend... "GHOST"
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[informant] => ebooibo
[notes] => Edited for spelling as requested. In the future please type out the whole word instead of typing shortcuts like 'u' and '2', if you are to request a spellcheck. Thankyou. - Moderator_16
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Hmm you know who you are
Contributed by
ebooibo
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Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 02:42:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
StoryPoetry
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Beautiful young people are accidents of nature....don't let your looks get the best of you boo , your problems are not problems but rather a solution to the situation that exists, experiences are not to determine the future but rather it's a victory claimed over what was, how is it that you meet someone and they seem so perfect and you know it would never work but still give them the benefit of the doubt, everyday people lie to God and they are forgiven but it hurts when you lie to yourself being in the image of the creator, looks are meant to get you over the bar on the physical aspect but it's ones experiences that rather shapes the outer and inner looks and that itself is an advantage over any physical beauty the world disposes, the difference is that we both are the same when it comes to looks, we could have anybody we desire, never judge the book by its cover because it's what's wriiten inside that is dangerous to the human soul, i felt it was too good to be true but i try to lie to myself that it wasn't until i started to read the inside of your book that i come to realize that you were just like the opposites before... you know me, i'm always at the right place at the wrong time (wink, wink, wink), like a ghost that passes through time, time and time again i live through it... you know who you are? "pain is temporary, pride is forever, though my heart was murdered, it still beats, Thank you for the fake times'.... i hope you enjoy yourself this weekend... "GHOST"
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Re: Hmm you know who you are
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by isis1987 on
Wednesday, 12th September 2007 @ 04:17:27 PM AEST
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| well i liked it. also i like the comment by the mod. i take it you text alot. LOL! very nice. ;-) |
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Re: Hmm you know who you are
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by emystar on
Monday, 8th April 2013 @ 12:56:27 PM AEST
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Very thought provoking write.
Very interesting too.
blessings,
emy |
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