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Array ( [sid] => 117912 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Green eyed beauty [time] => 2006-04-07 19:42:52 [hometext] => That friend that you fell in love with the moment you met, but friendship may have ruined the chance for anything more. [bodytext] => Perfection doesnt exist
except in an imperfect world
and in my world you are perfect to me
your green eyes shimmer and glimmer like leaves
after being covered by a mid summer rain
your smile radiates more then the moon
even when full and out in the rural
your personality shines more then the sun off the snow
in an artic paradise it still warms my soul
I know nothings perfect
but that cant be true
because in my mind you are
and it will always be true

MW [comments] => 2 [counter] => 164 [topic] => 33 [informant] => luckedout [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 4 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => SecretLove )

Green eyed beauty

Contributed by luckedout on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:42:52 PM in AEST
Topic: SecretLove

Perfection doesnt exist
except in an imperfect world
and in my world you are perfect to me
your green eyes shimmer and glimmer like leaves
after being covered by a mid summer rain
your smile radiates more then the moon
even when full and out in the rural
your personality shines more then the sun off the snow
in an artic paradise it still warms my soul
I know nothings perfect
but that cant be true
because in my mind you are
and it will always be true

MW

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Re: Green eyed beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:45:27 PM AEST
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Wow...I love it.

Re: Green eyed beauty (User Rating: 1 )
by TiaXander on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 01:53:53 PM AEST
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OMG did I write that!lol just kidd'n but have written many poems like this heheheh. Its something almost everyone can relate to. Don't give up cause I think for a while seeing and caring from a distance is almost enough. Still I can speak from experience that it is tempting to admit everything BUT yes that but! I know its hard....What can you do? Take it day by day who knows maybe she feels the same way.

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