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Array ( [sid] => 117909 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => I'll take you away [time] => 2006-04-07 19:04:59 [hometext] => [bodytext] => Breathe in, Breathe out
I'm trying to gain my composure
You take me breath away

It's pouring outside
I know you're lonely
I'll take the rain away

You bite the bullet
You swallow the pill
I'll take your pain away

All this has gathered up in you
Your heart is heavy
I know, I've felt the same

Lay your weary head
On my weary pillow
We'll sleep the night away

Look me in the eyes
Tell me you don't care
I'll believe the words you say

Clear the fog off your window
See me waiting there
I'll take you away

I'll take you away [comments] => 2 [counter] => 148 [topic] => 48 [informant] => the_story_of_the_year [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 2 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => EmotionalPoetry )
I'll take you away

Contributed by the_story_of_the_year on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:04:59 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



Breathe in, Breathe out
I'm trying to gain my composure
You take me breath away

It's pouring outside
I know you're lonely
I'll take the rain away

You bite the bullet
You swallow the pill
I'll take your pain away

All this has gathered up in you
Your heart is heavy
I know, I've felt the same

Lay your weary head
On my weary pillow
We'll sleep the night away

Look me in the eyes
Tell me you don't care
I'll believe the words you say

Clear the fog off your window
See me waiting there
I'll take you away

I'll take you away




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Re: I'll take you away (User Rating: 1 )
by Kimberlynn on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 07:22:34 PM AEST
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Awwwww....That is one of the sweetest thing I ever read. You did really well, I L-O-V-E-D it.


Re: I'll take you away (User Rating: 1 )
by In_a_while on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 11:56:14 AM AEST
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very wonderfully written! it's good to read great writing
once in a while...

All this has gathered up in you
Your heart is heavy
I know, I've felt the same

a favourite stanza of mine... but the whole piece is
very touching. Keep it up!




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