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COLD WHITE LIGHT
Contributed by
CEMETERY77
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Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 08:06:17 AM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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That which we search for its diffucult to find. The chill that runs down the small of your spine that brisk darkness one becomes immersed in. "The Cold White Light"...a exquisite chill on a desolate winters morning. Mixed with sunlight and sadness causes one's soul to dim. A memento of the beauty of death as it takes you to the 4th world. I hear the resonance of unearthly chants by the sirens, who lure me to the other side. I hear Violins playing from a distance but it scares me. Is this a dream to real to Interpret? I make my way back to the darkness because the light is too bright, to real. I am so use to loneliness and misery the light burns my dreams with a narrow breeze of dark tranquility. Someone hold my hand and guide me into the light becuse I know its my fate. Its so far away, so cold, and so bright. Could darkness and light be one in the same? time is a curse to us all...
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Re: COLD WHITE LIGHT
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by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 06:39:56 PM AEST
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| Nice, I like it. It also has a good point, keep on writing! |
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Re: COLD WHITE LIGHT
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by CatKin on
Sunday, 2nd September 2007 @ 07:13:48 AM AEST
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Very nicely written. I know exactly where you're coming from and I think you're right.
Keep writing. It helps some how X |
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Re: COLD WHITE LIGHT
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by flamingblade on
Sunday, 9th September 2007 @ 10:11:21 AM AEST
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pretty good
does have an excellent point
and isn't that the point?
so good job, and keep it up!
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