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Untitiled
Contributed by
Aleksander_Kubicki
on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 02:08:44 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Today was my last day
I took my last breath
and there was so much that
i wanted to say
never did i think much
about death
how could this be
there is nothing left for me
Copyright ©
Aleksander_Kubicki
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2006-04-07 02:08:44] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Untitiled
(User Rating: 1 ) by FRANCO on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:13:08 AM AEST (User
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Friend don't you ever try to play with the words. it hurts.
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Re: Untitiled
(User Rating: 1 ) by Kimberlynn on
Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 06:52:00 PM AEST (User
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It sounds so sad, thank goodness you said something about that you weren't suicidal, other wise, the poem sounds like it is. I like it though. |
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