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could see
First hand
The pain
You caused me
If you
Think thats it
Im over it
You never
Knew me
To begin with
Here I was
Trying to turn
A dream into reality
Thats gets me thinking
Was I ever loved by you
Or did I summon up
That part too
Seems to me
I just wanted
So much to believe
I may act like
Its all okay
But Im breaking down
Every minute of everyday
Id rather die
then to let you
See me cry
Everything you’ve
Put me through
Worse thing
I could do
Is cry before you...
Wont give you
The satisfaction… [comments] => 4 [counter] => 236 [topic] => 75 [informant] => TiaXander [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 5 [ratings] => 1 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => anguished )

Was I Ever Loved By You?

Contributed by TiaXander on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 10:17:19 PM in AEST
Topic: anguished

I wish you
could see
First hand
The pain
You caused me
If you
Think thats it
Im over it
You never
Knew me
To begin with
Here I was
Trying to turn
A dream into reality
Thats gets me thinking
Was I ever loved by you
Or did I summon up
That part too
Seems to me
I just wanted
So much to believe
I may act like
Its all okay
But Im breaking down
Every minute of everyday
Id rather die
then to let you
See me cry
Everything you’ve
Put me through
Worse thing
I could do
Is cry before you...
Wont give you
The satisfaction…

Copyright Â© TiaXander ... [ 2006-04-06 22:17:19]
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Re: Was I Ever Loved By You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Heretic on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 05:27:15 AM AEST
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I am going throught something similar right now. Hang in there I know its hard. Nice write.

Re: Was I Ever Loved By You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Hautebush on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:13:53 AM AEST
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Oh the agony. I understand your feeings so well. The title of the poem drew me and I just had to read it. The short lines make for an effective poem. The psychological implications are extreme. Why would you rather die than let someone see your anguish? Be who you are and feel what you feel. Also, maybe this person did not feel ever loved by you. Remember this: you will love again and someone will love you. Don't die, go ahead and cry for goodness sake. Then, write a love poem for all of us to read. Hautebush

Re: Was I Ever Loved By You? (User Rating: 1 )
by Archie on Friday, 7th April 2006 @ 11:48:58 AM AEST
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This reminds me of a song;

"I've been over you
for some time now baby
I don't miss your kiss
like before now
any more now. . ."

You have written a very emotive piece and it is easy for the reader to get intouch with how you feel.

Quote from "Nothing's Broken but My Heart" by Celine Dion

Re: Was I Ever Loved By You? (User Rating: 1 )
by BOZEEN on Saturday, 17th November 2007 @ 06:35:27 AM AEST
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THIS POEM WAS GREAT I FELT YOUR ANGER,TOO SOME PEOPLE HAVE TO LOSE BEFORE THEY CAN WIN.

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