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Array ( [sid] => 117840 [catid] => 1 [aid] => mick [title] => Tearing To Shreds [time] => 2006-04-06 17:32:21 [hometext] => Basically How Im Feeling About Life Right Now....Blah. -_- [bodytext] => Tearing To Shreds...

i hate what ive done
im tearing to shreds
the words you whisper
repeat through my head
i cant keep crying
but these tears they still fall
if i keep tearing to shreds
i'll be nothing at all

you say you can fix me
i know thats not true
theres missing pieces
theres nothing you can do

you say follow your heart
but how can i when its in a million
pieces on the floor
with my head hung low
these eyes full of tears
i see you standing at the door

i know you want to help
but theres nothing you can do
you say you can fix me
but we both know thats not true

your whisper schreeching
in my brain
the words you scream
dirve me insane
im bleeding outside
im tearing to shreds
the way you feel
the things youve said
i try to run away
but i stand and i fall
if i keep tearing to shreds
i'll be nothing at all

i give it one last try
ignoring things that youve said
slowly picking up
each tiny little shred
but here you come again
screaming in my face
taking me back
to this lonely place
the things you keep saying
plus the things that youve said
im falling apart
im tearing to shreds

The End. [comments] => 2 [counter] => 178 [topic] => 13 [informant] => xDiSaStErPiEcEx [notes] => [ihome] => 0 [alanguage] => english [acomm] => 0 [haspoll] => 0 [pollID] => 0 [score] => 0 [ratings] => 0 [editpoem] => 1 [associated] => [topicname] => DarkPoetry )
Tearing To Shreds

Contributed by xDiSaStErPiEcEx on Thursday, 6th April 2006 @ 05:32:21 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



Tearing To Shreds...

i hate what ive done
im tearing to shreds
the words you whisper
repeat through my head
i cant keep crying
but these tears they still fall
if i keep tearing to shreds
i'll be nothing at all

you say you can fix me
i know thats not true
theres missing pieces
theres nothing you can do

you say follow your heart
but how can i when its in a million
pieces on the floor
with my head hung low
these eyes full of tears
i see you standing at the door

i know you want to help
but theres nothing you can do
you say you can fix me
but we both know thats not true

your whisper schreeching
in my brain
the words you scream
dirve me insane
im bleeding outside
im tearing to shreds
the way you feel
the things youve said
i try to run away
but i stand and i fall
if i keep tearing to shreds
i'll be nothing at all

i give it one last try
ignoring things that youve said
slowly picking up
each tiny little shred
but here you come again
screaming in my face
taking me back
to this lonely place
the things you keep saying
plus the things that youve said
im falling apart
im tearing to shreds

The End.




Copyright © xDiSaStErPiEcEx ... [ 2006-04-06 17:32:21]
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Re: Tearing To Shreds (User Rating: 1 )
by candysears on Saturday, 8th April 2006 @ 09:54:26 AM AEST
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Nice write..
It is good to express your hurt and pain..
God Bless!


Re: Tearing To Shreds (User Rating: 1 )
by MeenieMo on Saturday, 15th April 2006 @ 05:44:27 PM AEST
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wow!!!!
This poem describes exactly how i was last month. great description.
it's good to c that you can express yourself in poetry. !! :)




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